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BeasPeas
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Freedom of the Sea
Best to your friend with Aspergers, the poet, who wrote this piece. Water is soothing to swim or bathe in as well as watching a body of water from the shore or in a boat. Water therapy is useful, too. Marilyn


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Thank you so very much, I am so amazed at what he can do and yet cant function in society
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Gert sherwood
 
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Freedom of the Sea
Barb Your friend has written a poem that makes me feel at peace, even if I don't live by the sea.
His thought are shown us that he know where he desires to life his eternal days.
Gert


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
    I love the sea but am leery of what is down deep. Thank you
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damommy
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Freedom of the Sea
This is beautiful! He certainly has a talent for writing free verse poetry. I especially like ' . . . you can hear their whispers'. Tell him how wonderful his poetry is for me.


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
    I will do that. He is so amazing because his thoughts go so deep but otherwise he is a child in an adults body
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Teri7
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This is a very well written poem my friend that was written by your friend. Very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. May God bless you and this friend during this time of trials. love and blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    He will be happy, thankyou so much
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papa55mike
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Active but odd, that sure sounds like me. What a wonderfully written, full of information poem. I love the author notes. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thank you so very much
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