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For Jannypan: In Memory of Tim
Mary Kay,
This is a good ode to Jan and her brother. You wrote about her loss well both in the poem and the notes.
Congrats on winning the reviewing contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy New Year
Joan


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much, Joan, for your excellent and thoughtful review, for the five stars and for your Congratulations on my winning the Reviewing Contest. May God bless you and your family with a safe and Happy New Year, also!
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo

reply by dragonpoet on 03-Jan-2021
    Don't mention it, Mary Kay.
    Joan
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Prayer for Spangle
Yes, He will indeed hold us, regardless of the frailties of our outward bodies. When we commit our heat and soul to Him, He holds us in His everlasting arms, safe and secure. Beautiful poem. Praying for Janet.


 Comment Written 28-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
    Amen! Thank you for the wonderful review, Wendy! Happy New Year!!
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Prayer for Spangle
Thank you, Helen. May Janet find a calming peace and become better, we all have fallen, but it looks like her's are bad. This is a nice Sapphonic Triad poem. I never heard of it, but I'm new to poetry.


 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
    I hope you'll try one. It's easy especially if you have a quote you want to focus on. Thanks for reviewing and for your compassion for our sister. Bless you!
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Prayer for Spangle
Helen, Thank you for posting this Sapphonic Triad about Janet and her fall. She is in my prayers. I appreciate all you do to help us on here! love, blessings and Happy New Year! Teri


 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
    Thank you so much, Teri, especially, for your prayers!! Appreciate your super rating, too! Hugs!!
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Prayer for Spangle
Prayers fly heavenward for Janet! It does seem like there have been many falls and illnesses to deal with. I pray the Divine Healer eases her pain and speeds her healing. What an intriguing form as well! --Karenina


 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
    Thank you so much, Karenina! Your prayers are so appreciated! We are becoming more fragile every year on Earth we live. Hugs!!

reply by karenina on 30-Dec-2020
    OH I KNOW! I was shoveling twelve inches of "partly cloudy" (oh those weatherman)---and slipped on the ice beneath. My back is still protesting!--Karenina

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
    Oh no!! Hope you are recovering well. I used Arnica gel for the bruising.
    🙏💖💕
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Prayer for Spangle
This was great Helen, your words covered the expectations of life and to trust in God. I will definitely keep Janet in our prayers, that sounds horrible with all she did and I will definitely pray for a successful surgery. This was great.


 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
    Thank you so much for your prayers, Alie! She had her surgery today. She couldn't get to the computer because she was mostly on her sofa. I hope she has someone visiting and helping her.
    Hugs!

reply by aryr on 30-Dec-2020
    You are so very welcome Helen. I agree that she should have someone helping her. Prayers for Janet will keep coming. Thank you for thinking of her. Hugss.
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Prayer for Spangle
-Very nice artwork
and quote, Helen.
-I am sorry to hear
about Janet.
-You chose a good form
for your poem for her.
-I like how you show that
even though she fell,
that God and faith will
protect her and keep her well.
-Thanks for caring and sharing
the poem.


 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Pam! She had her surgery yesterday so am praying for a quick recovery.
    Hugs!!

reply by Pam (respa) on 31-Dec-2020
    You are very welcome, Helen, and thanks for sharing the news. Happy 2021 to you, too!!!
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Prayer for Spangle
I expect we shall hear of more falls and slips as winter tightens its hold on the northern hemisphere. This is a most apposite piece under the circumstances.


 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
    Thanks so much, Jim! We are all more vulnerable now.
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Prayer for Spangle
A very well-written sapphonic triad. Sometimes we slip and fall on the path God guides us to walk on we get physically hurt and the pain is extremely hard to beat. Spiritually we must stay strong and let God heal us. Good luck, my prayers are with Janet and that He will allows a speedy recovery.


 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
    Sorry for my late reply, Sandra! Appreciate the review. She had her surgery yesterday. Thank you so much for your prayers!!
    Hugs!
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Prayer for Spangle
I will keep her in my prayers. Elderly falls are especially bad with brittle bones too. It is not a good time to be having surgery with the pandemic putting people in the hospital. Thanks for sharing the poem and for sharing so we can lift up another in prayer.


 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
    Yes, we keep getting so vulnerable and fragile as we age! Hope we get stronger in spirit and in faith!
    Thanks so much for your prayers, Annie!
    Hugs!
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