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Prose and Poem Prayers for Fanstorians

  11 total reviews 
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Alchera
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Rating of Chapter 19 -
Prayers for Our Beautiful Yvonne
Outstanding work indeed! I have read it many times without being able to say or write anything about it? What could I write to a mother who has just lost her son if not feel her dolorous painful mourn wrapped up in her heavy black cloak? You, personally have well understood and felt it on your skin,dearest Mary Kay when you lost your brother and had to tell your aunt about his death, your mother's sister, and this was difficult to express. How could you have told it to your mother about him? There is no explanation of how much a mother will ever love her life time son! HIs mother is his mother and her love for her son is unique until death survive! A great immense praying work indeed, dearest friend of mine. May your days with Jorge shine over all this difficult disgraceful moment walking with Our Lord Jesus Christ blessed! Tony


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
    Thank you, my dear friend Tony, for your very touching and heartfelt review of this prayer. I am so grateful, every time someone reads it, because I know that prayers are being lifted for Yvonne, "damommy," one of our own FanStory writers. As indescribable as that day was for me, when I had to break that unspeakable news to my Mom and her sister, my aunt, none of us can ever fully know the extent of another's pain but God Himself, but that is also why we can trust that our intercession is being heard by the most tender of hearts. The Father Himself knows the pain of losing a Son! And so we pray.
    I am so glad that Yvonne is back with us now. We writers often use our words to heal our wounded hearts, it is a blessing that we all share. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and for the six shining stars. Thank you for the blessing, as I pray also for the blessing of the Lord Jesus Christ upon you and your entire family! In His Precious Name, Amen.
    - Mary Kay
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joycetreasures
Author, Artist, Screenwriter, Sculptor, Numismatist,
Jesus I Don't Understand
 
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Rating of Chapter 19 -
Prayers for Our Beautiful Yvonne
Hello Mary Kay,
God bless you. Your poem and message to Yvonne is so exceedingly kind, precious, loving, and sincere. I did not until this moment, know of the loss of Yvonne's precious son. I am so sorry she must endure this awful pain and sadness. Mary, I am also sorry for your past loss of your brother. Oh yes, God knows our pain and our heart. He is so near to Yvonne as the air she breathes. I am a mother of one son/child, and I cannot imagine Monty leaving this earth before me. I will pray to our Father above for renewal of Yvonne's strength and peace. The FanStory family cares for each other. Mary Kay, your love, and compassion for your friend shows clearly in this beautiful message. Also, I am sure your message has also brought comfort to others on this FanStory platform. May God bless you both richly.
Yvonne, I am deeply sorry for the loss of your son and will pray for you and your family's peace. Trust in the Lord and He will get you through this. God loves you, and all His children.

Proverbs 3:5 - Trust in the LORD with all thine heart; and lean not unto thine own understanding.
Matthew 5:4 - Blessed are they that mourn: for they shall be comforted.


 Comment Written 05-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
    Thank you for your beautiful review, Joyce. It always warms my heart when people read this prayer, and take it to heart, because it means that more prayers are being lifted up for our dear Yvonne. I was happy to see that she (damommy) is back on FanStory, writing poems again. It's what she does so well, and I'm sure it helps during these very tough times.

    Thank you, also, for your kind expressions of sympathy for my past loss of my brother, John. I saw firsthand, how hard it was for my Mom, and I would never want this for anyone else.
    May God bless and protect you, Monty and your whole family.
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo

reply by joycetreasures on 05-Nov-2020
    Thank you. We have so much to be grateful for these days.

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
    Amen.
Comment by
Mary Kay Bonfante
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Rating of Chapter 24 -
Keep on Praying
Amen! Christ absolutely won the victory with the Cross. And we continue to pray for Portia, our friend and sister in Christ. Portia has given me much encouragement and comfort in times of trouble, and I have not forgotten her. I am praying for Portia and her family members (especially for her husband and son). May God meet her and her dear family members at their point of need, and come through for them miraculously, through the power of His Blood! In the Precious Name of Jesus, Amen!


 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
    Hi Mary Kay! Thanks so much for reviewing especially for praying!! I heard through snail mail and Portia said that her son, Rod is doing well after his surgery. Her husband is still waiting for his surgery but she didn't say much about how her own health is. Appreciate you! Hugs!

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 04-Nov-2020
    Wow! Snail mail! It still works. So happy to hear that Portia's son Rod is doing well, post-surgery. Will continue praying for Portia, her husband and Rod! Thank you also, much appreciation and hugs back!
    - Mary Kay xoxo
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patcelaw
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Keep on Praying
This is a great peppered pickle poem and has a good message. There are many on this site who are suffering and we do need to pray for them. My eyesight is failing and it is hard for me. I keep praying that God will heal my eyes.
Patricia


 Comment Written 29-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Patricia! You're okay! Thanks so much for the review. Saying a prayer for the Lord to heal your eyes. I know you've had problems with them for a long time.
    Hugs!
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Y. M. Roger
FantasyGirl
 
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Keep on Praying
A pickled pepper call to prayer... now who can resist that?! I had no idea about Portia, and you are right, she has not had that smiling face around here at all lately. Thanx so much for the 'heads up', my lady... ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much, Yvette! And I hope all is going with preparing your house for market. That's such a big job!
    Hugs!
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poetwatch
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Keep on Praying
We all pray for our families and our friends, Helen. I pray for all of God's children. It looks like the time is near, but do not fear, for love is always with those that believe in God' love. I believe in a lot of things, but my belief in my God and his Son are stronger. Take care of yourself and pray for all of mankind. Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
    Yes, I guess if we are really in tune with the Spirit, we would be praying all day long...Thanks so much for reviewing, Jose!
    Blessings!
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Lucy de Welles
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Keep on Praying
Oh dear .... well, there is no chance that this prayer will not reach her. Thank you so much for posting these prayers. They encourage everyone, Helen.
Well done,
Lucy


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
    Appreciate your confidence in the Lord, Lucy. Let's keep praying for all we know, who need our prayers!
    Hugs!
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Sandra du Plessis
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Rating of Chapter 24 -
Keep on Praying
A very well-written peppered pickle for the multi-author book about praying for our friends that need some extra prayers dealing with sickness and death of loved ones dear to their hearts.


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
    Thank you, Sandra! Let's keep praying! Hugs!
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BethShelby
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Rating of Chapter 24 -
Keep on Praying
This is a poem that reminds us to keep praying even when we don't see the results of our prayer. We need to have faith that God hears they and works things according to his will. In the end, he had won the victory of life for all who believe.


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
    Amen! That is the Truth that we can cling to even when everything looks so dismal. Thank you for understanding! Hugs!
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amada
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Keep on Praying
"Dismay can threaten holy gain." I feel so cold while reading those words. It is so easy to be in dismay, we are just human...Your poem is insightful, but it must hold a grain of grace.


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    Thanks for pointing out that line. You're right that it could sound like it is threatening. I only meant that we have so much to gain in faith if we don't give up. But I'm not meaning that salvation would be lost. I'll think about re-wording. Thanks for your feedback, Amada! Blessings!
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