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Football - A Novel


A mother faces life's struggles.

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Rosemary Everson1
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Epilogue???
Sounds like a good idea. Just probably when she gets through the episodes of chemotherapy they will have a reception like no other they have been to...


 Comment Written 01-May-2022



reply by the author on 02-May-2022
    Thank you for reading this. I appreciate.
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Rosemary Everson1
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What a wonderful ending. I did find the last chapter after searching. It is always good to read the finale. And what a finale it was. Cancer is such a tragic disease. I hope she begins to feel better and will be a happy bride. It sure sounds like a joyous ending!


 Comment Written 01-May-2022



reply by the author on 02-May-2022
    Thank you for going back and reading this with no money attached. I appreciate it.
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As an exercise in writing an epilogue this is great stuff. Congratulations on doing something you had no intention of doing and doing it quite superbly.


 Comment Written 06-Apr-2022



reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
    Thank you. I still have a few upset reviewers. LOL
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LOL you are a trip. Well, that's one way of getting out of it. Blame it on the characters. I gotcha. That was very clever. Even though, I too complained. You have the right to end your story as you see fit. It was a great story. Hope Katherine and Gabriel live happily ever after...and cancer free.


 Comment Written 05-Apr-2022



reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
    LOL Another epilogue may be coming, but don't know.
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It's like an emptiness sets in after characters we've grown close to are gone, or on to a new chapter in their lives. But not everything is permanent in life, so I'm figuring that you'll find a reason to carry on the story. LOL. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 03-Apr-2022



reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
    Thank you. We'll see what Katherine and Gabriel come up with.
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Sometimes no epilogue is best .That way the reader can imagine the continuation as per his/her fancy .Of course we will honour their privacy and we will be here if and when they want to share their life with us.


 Comment Written 03-Apr-2022



reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
    Thank you for the kind review.
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Yes, I too was hoping for an epilogue to see how they are going. That's because they seemed such real and authentic people, friends. I will wait patiently until the right time for them to share how they are. Thank you!! I am sure everyone enjoyed their story which you brought to life.
Wendy


 Comment Written 03-Apr-2022



reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
    Thank you. We'll see what Katherine and Gabriel come up with.
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This is a clever way to address the request of writing an epilogue. As writer's, I think we perfect our craft through the experience of the stories we tell. I appreciate you sharing that your character's guide you to the end.


 Comment Written 02-Apr-2022



reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
    Thank you.
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Rating of Chapter 81 -
Epilogue???
I appreciate the epilog and appreciate the character's wishing to be left alone. It is time for such. No doubt for the family to get to know each other. As always, I have enjoyed your stories.


 Comment Written 02-Apr-2022



reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
    Thank you.
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-Nice artwork, barbara.
-This came as a big surprise.
-It just shows how well you
did with the book because we all loved it.
-Hopefully, Gabe and Katherine will
work things out. They are wonderful
characters, along with the children and their
friends and co-workers.
-Good luck with whatever you decide to do.
-Until then, I will look forward to their future.


 Comment Written 02-Apr-2022



reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
    Thank you.

reply by Pam (respa) on 03-Apr-2022
    You are welcome.
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