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Blessings for Barbara


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Kingsrookviii
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Absolutely gorgeous poem; very uplifting and happy. This is a cool format, too, with the incredible picture. The bit of pink really make this a visual treat. I love Fall so much. Great work. Bruce.


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
    Thanks for the review, Bruce. I appreciate your comments about the poem being uplifting and happy, along with the format and picture. I know you said you love Fall. I like the season, too. Don't forget Sun. or whatever day my next poem is up. Another autumn one.
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Rating of Chapter 19 -
Presents for Barb
You have written a happy and creative birthday poem for Barbara. I like your smooth flow of words and lines. "That cakes for all of us" is a great line. Let's celebrate this lady's birthday! Excellent poetic form and use of words.


 Comment Written 29-Oct-2020


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Presents for Barb
you share your gift for that gift of a friend. your words and your meaning was spiritually a gift of expression. your poem was a joy to read. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

your so vein
godlucifer


 Comment Written 29-Oct-2020


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Rating of Chapter 19 -
Presents for Barb
An excellent good will poem Tina, I do know at least three Barbaras on-site, but I've always thought that writing birthday poems is a marvellous thing anyway. Beautifully written Tina, well done, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 29-Oct-2020


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Rating of Chapter 19 -
Presents for Barb
-Lovely image and
great presentation, Tina.
-You have written a very
good poem for Barb!
-I like the rhyme and
smooth flow, and humor.
-I like the reference to
her name and how it won't rhyme,
and the line about being sweet.
-Very well done; I think Barbara
will love it.
-Hope you are doing well.


 Comment Written 29-Oct-2020


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"Present for Barb", is a well-written, and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review, this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020


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Presents for Barb
Dear Tina, it is wonderful for you to write this poem for Barbara. I never thought like you, that like you, I could not find a rhyme. I really appreciate you're sort of writing this for all of us, and wanted to ask only one question; about the play of words on "presence" and "presents".
I am a little slow at figuring things like this, out.


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the review. This was do fun to do! I used "presence" because of the presence of people at her party. I hope that makes sense :-)

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the review. This was do fun to do! I used "presence" because of the presence of people at her party. I hope that makes sense :-)

reply by Suzanna Ray on 29-Oct-2020
    It does!
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Rating of Chapter 19 -
Presents for Barb
This is exactly right for the book.
Form - good sized font with a colour that doesn't blur and fits perfectly with your illustration
content - lots of ideas and rhymes to mull over. It will provide a lot of entertainment
Thank you so much for this demonstration of your skills


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
    Ok great to hear. I'm glad you like it. It is fun to write for others , especially as a part of a gift. What a sweet thing you are doing for her! Thank you for the stars. I shine them back at you, my friend!
    All the best to you!
    Tina

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
    Ok great to hear. I'm glad you like it. It is fun to write for others , especially as a part of a gift. What a sweet thing you are doing for her! Thank you for the stars. I shine them back at you, my friend!
    All the best to you!
    Tina
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Rating of Chapter 19 -
Presents for Barb
The author's words are sweet, interesting, descriptive and creative.
I liked the way the author used gentle humor to express these words. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is beautiful and compliments
this poem. Hope you had a great day!


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much. Your reviews are always appreciated, and always eloquent too!
    Tina

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much. Your reviews are always appreciated, and always eloquent too!
    Tina
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Rating of Chapter 19 -
Presents for Barb
When is her birthday, Tina? I like to wish that birthday girl a long and loving day. :) Can anyone join in the fun and wish this lady their love? Your poem is very nice I'm sure she will love it. Thank you for sharing your love. :)


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
    Katherine M. Keene is making a book for her moms birthday in December. Anyone can write ! Go to her page and scroll down to Blessings for Barbara.
    Thank you for this review:)
    Tina

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
    Katherine M. Keene is making a book for her moms birthday in December. Anyone can write ! Go to her page and scroll down to Blessings for Barbara.
    Thank you for this review:)
    Tina
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