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Realms of Rhyme


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  51 total reviews 
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lynner
 
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Rating of Chapter 24 -
A Tuesday Rose
Hi there:

It's lynner. I was replying to a review of one of my poems and discovered it was Lainee. I looked further to her profile, read it and then say that she felt your poem
"A Tuesday Rose" deserved attention. So I have read it and do agree.

Just wanted to say hello.
Warmest regards,
lynner


 Comment Written 20-Nov-2005


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SamPark
 
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Rating of Chapter 24 -
A Tuesday Rose
Your wordplay is a delight. I especially enjoyed the last three verses, and the first three. Just wondered how you do it. Read your written words and use your ears?Sit quiet and let the muse whisper? Smoke the devil's weed? Use the extra connections in a brain full of beautiful words? Take a nap? How do you arrive at the proper phrase? Thanks. Sam


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2005


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JosephCa64
 
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Rating of Chapter 24 -
A Tuesday Rose
Very well done, very good use of language, very nice rhyming sequences. I enjoyed it very much. It is heartfelt and sincere-the poet does a great job of covering many thoughts and expressions on a very terse canvas


 Comment Written 11-Jul-2005


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Diny
 
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Rating of Prologue -
The Vine to the Realm
When er I need a break from life
I read your work and lighten strife
To say you are indeed inspired
Can I be president of your fan club hired?

Silly little ditty I would never compare myt alents to yours
Just wanted to say Congrates on the seal...
Blessings
Diny


 Comment Written 07-Jul-2005


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IrishWind
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 24 -
A Tuesday Rose
That was really beautiful! I dont know much about poetry and I know it doesnt have to rhymn but yours did! And I really liked it.


 Comment Written 06-Jul-2005


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Carol Johnson
 
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Rating of Prologue -
O Solemn Sea
So much different from the last poem. I though the repetition of the first line of each stanza worked well. I felt that this would probably be much stronger spoken outloud. I could imagine the first line being emphasized and read louder.

Terrific images. Another powerful poem. I was curious as to why it was marked as prologue though. Was that a mistake?



 Comment Written 14-Jun-2005


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Carol Johnson
 
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Rating of Prologue -
The Vine to the Realm
Very nice. What a perfect introduction. Comparing ideas to seeds and the growth of them is a wonderful idea. This promises to be a terrific start.

Congratulations on the recognition. I look forward to reading your book.


 Comment Written 14-Jun-2005


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96744mom
 
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Rating of Chapter 12 -
A Cautionary Tale
I was extremely fascinated by this poem. I liked the way it rhymes and the wat it ends. Very brilliantly written. At this time I have no negative comments nor dislikes. Keep writing.


 Comment Written 10-Jun-2005


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clhutchinson
 
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Rating of Chapter 22 -
The Duel For An April Fool
The "beach" brought in beautiful use of metaphors through out adding great imagery to feelings and thoughts which are expressed clearly and with line that flow nicely with complimenting rhymes.


 Comment Written 20-May-2005


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Walter L. Jones
 
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Rating of Chapter 22 -
The Duel For An April Fool
So it is a dance in side the mind lifted to the page, well you see, and better you write, always feeling the words and creating the image, good stuff. Raised the bar another notch... Walt


 Comment Written 18-May-2005


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