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All rhymes, but different flavors of rhyme

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Sugarray77
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
A Study In Rodin
I really enjoyed this poem. The mental imagery is apt and reminds me of Rodin's 'The Thinker' which I've seen a few times. It was fun of you to bring a human story to this and not solely focus on th sculpture. Well done.


 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017


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A Study In Rodin
This is cool. The imagery you painted was wonderful as I observed within the scenery of artwork and creation. A snicker did rise to the lips as the adventure unfolded and as such has made my day. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent with the world.


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2008



reply by the author on 05-Jun-2008
    Thank you very much, giftid3
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Ivy North
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 2 -
The Aim Of Cupid
I liked the flow of this, and how you endeared the reader to the poem, captured them and then led them to a great smile at the end.


 Comment Written 28-Nov-2007


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Paycojoe
 
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Rating of Chapter 2 -
The Aim Of Cupid
I remember these shirts - LOL ....this is a humorous and well written piece - and I was looking for humor tonight...this did it and I thank you for that....
take care Paycojoe


 Comment Written 12-Oct-2007


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Gracie Lacie
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 21 -
Whitley
Wow, your poems really flow together in perfect rhythm. It's very captivating and held my attention the whole time. Another thing I notice about all your poems is that they all end very well. Keep it up.


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2007


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Gracie Lacie
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 20 -
The Little Things
It's a really sweet poem, and I have no corrections. I especially like the last stanza, which comes to a very fulfilling close. Keep up the good work. I'll be sure to check out some of your other poems.


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2007


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Amazonian
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 2 -
The Aim Of Cupid
Outstanding!

I love the unexpected twist and the moralization on it.

Just a picky note here: "unloosing" is not a word. The word is "loose," and its variants: loosen, loosening and perhaps even "loosing." It's like "that." You can't "unthaw" something -- that would have to be "to freeze" it.


 Comment Written 12-Jan-2007



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2007
    Thank you. This is so old I forgot about it. Maybe I'll use unleashing.
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PoesyPoet
 
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Rating of Chapter 2 -
The Aim Of Cupid
This was a "funtastical" read. I love humor in poetry and you, dear poet have filled this one up! I had to read it to my husband! Now I have him laughing too.
Job well done.
Celeste


 Comment Written 01-Dec-2006



reply by the author on 26-Dec-2006
    Thank you so much, Celeste.
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Boot
 
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Rating of Chapter 20 -
The Little Things
It was my delight to read this treatise on love. The rhyme was flawless; the sentiment perfect! THe rhyme is not forced at all. It reads more like a story.


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2006



reply by the author on 12-Nov-2006
    Thank you very much, Boot. This poem means a lot to me.
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McNight_08
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 20 -
The Little Things
I like the way you've structured it... it sounds so sad near the beginning but then ends on a slightly happier note.

Usually I don't like poetry with a set rhyming scheme but this one came out quit nicely.

Though it still leaves a sense of something missing, though I can't quit put my finger on it.

Well done though.

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 Comment Written 10-Jun-2006


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