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His Miracle.


20 word poem.

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This is a very beautiful and very true poem you have penned for the 20 Word contest. You used great descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love, Teri


 Comment Written 16-Dec-2020



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    Thank you very much.
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You have a vivid use of words that paints a picture of the cycle of the seasons and then your last line states "Ceaseless cycle, His miracle". There is a spiritual feel to your words and a good feeling in your poem. Excellent use of words and a smooth poetic form.


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2020



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The continuous cycle of life goes on silently changing. His design is perfect. How wondrous is our Creator. The four seasons that some take for granted whilst we give thanks for the sun and rain, snow covers the land protecting the new shoots until they rise and the cycle begins again. Thanks for sharing. K xx


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2020



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    THank you once again ,my friend for your beautiful stars. I am sorry my reply was delayed. Covid has upturned al the routine.

reply by Aussie on 20-Oct-2020
    I do hope you are well? We have no Covid in our state of Queensland due to the vigilance of our Premier. Blessings, Kay xx
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Good reminder that fall is upon us. Soon the trees will be shedding their colorful leaves at my place near the lake.
This is a good entry. I hope you win.


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2020



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Nice job of meeting the 20-word challenge, matching the message with another art form. Congratulations on your wisdom of recognizing the miracle associated with the presence of our Creator--seems to be a missing element in what we are surrounded by most of each day anymore. Good luck in your writing.


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2020



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This is an excellent entry for the Twenty Word Poem contest, I find. It provides a clear down to earth description of the seasonal changes that many of us await eagerly.


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2020



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A beautiful tribute to my favorite season. It makes me want to break out a candle and bake. Oops, I already did that! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sally xo


 Comment Written 14-Oct-2020



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Very beautiful writing love your wording . Leaves change colour, fall. Shoots spring then in summer swallows return. Ceaseless cycle his miracle. Very lovely artwork as well. Background colour works well .


 Comment Written 14-Oct-2020



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rama devi
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Nice work with all the S Sounds and the personification of nature. Love the artwork!

Skeletal trees survive on snow

That is my fevorite line.


Also, nice assonance of O coupled with consonance of S and W in swallow and snow


I also like the internal near rhyme of cycle and miracle in the closing. So true. It is!

Good luck in the contest. NAMASTE
Warmly,
rd


 Comment Written 14-Oct-2020



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    Thank you very much and Namaste.

reply by rama devi on 20-Oct-2020
    *Namaste*
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Hello Sanku, this is a well written piece of work. You have put a lot into just twenty words - a brief summary of the seasons. Well done with a delightful picture. God Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x


 Comment Written 14-Oct-2020



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    Thank you very much.
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