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A budding non conformist.

rhyming stanzas.

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Exceptional

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I liked your rhyming poem. One cannot make children or animals conform to our places of worship. I'm sure god understands their innocence. Good luck in the contest. XX K.

Comment Written 14-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020

Thank you very much for this glittering stars

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Strong rhymes include near/dear and shock/rocked.

The youngest always appear to be the most non-conforming as demonstrated by the screeching baby in the middle of the congregation.

Poem fits the contest well.

Comment Written 20-Nov-2020

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020

Thank you .I am sorry for the delay in reply...

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A very well-written poem about the young child that can be strong headed enough to practice non-conformity when they will not budge to do what you asked them to do.

Comment Written 16-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020

Thank you very much.

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Gypsy Blue Rose

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Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the Nonconformity writing prompt contest. Your approach is very unique and I like the topic.

Some cultures require to leave shoes by the door.

It's hard to read black font on orange.

Well done! Good luck in the contest.

Comment Written 16-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020

Thank you very much for stopping by to read my poem.

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Iza Deleanu

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You have a very special poem here. The babies have a mind of their own, they cry in the most unexpected times. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

Comment Written 16-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020

Thank you very much.

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Well, it sounds like she's a child and may have some objections to the many rules to approach God's splendor. Perhaps she knows that God doesn't mind some noise. Best wishes in the contest!

Comment Written 16-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020

Thank you very much.

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Michael Ludwinder

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I really enjoyed how you shared this poem not just with a message - but as a story. This was a short little story that was told like a poem. I could picture everything in my head. The story was interesting. And the writing was solid. Very creative! I enjoyed your poem/story.

Comment Written 15-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020

Thank you very much for taking time to read and review my 'little' poem.

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equestrik

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This is a perfect write for the non-conformist contest. Babies and children are truly like that! Nicely done and best of luck to you in the upcoming contest.

Comment Written 15-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020

Thank you very much .Yes may that is why we sometime envy them!

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Y. M. Roger

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LOL!! Oh, those young 'uns in the houses of worship... they certainly keep the non-conformist vision alive! ;) :) A delightful offering for this contest -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

Comment Written 15-Oct-2020

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Thank you very much.

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the13thpoet

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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

Comment Written 15-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020

Thank you very much for your comments

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