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Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Of the Revenge"

Romance in a world of magic.

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Iza Deleanu
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Poor Valerie diminished in a second by the ill intentions of the cruel Duchess, but who knows love wins at the end. Thank you for sharing and good luck


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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it.
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Wow -- although I'm not 'up to speed' on the story here, what a helluva night for poor Valerie! And I do hope that this Thara does come to her senses although the rendezvous with this Duc certainly will not help matters... But an awesome narrative and weaving of dialogue to truly get your reader there and listening rather than simply 'reading'! ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck with your book! ;)


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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate the feedback and I'm glad it came out so well. Valerie definitely was not having a good night.
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