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This should have been a rhyming poetry contest entry. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and is very relevant right now. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020



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    Thanks, Earl
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Far be it from me to fault you for seeing through your toes. It's a little unusual but fine with me as long as anything goes. I choose to see it through my eyes and it is lovely. Have a nice day.


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2020



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    Thanks, Beth
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The lovely rose brings on a feeling of encouragement to look for the beauty of life instead of finding fault. You seem to say bring on the daily problems. I'm looking for the good. Well stated. Appropriated called a Thanka. judi


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020



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    Thank you, Judi

reply by judiverse on 18-Oct-2020
    You're very welcome. judi
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A lovely tanka (thanka!) And you're so right that we can be uplifted by the beauty of life and focus on things that make us grateful, instead of "finding fault."


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020



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    Thank you, lyenochka.
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Dear Bill, you must be feeling sentimental to write such a beautiful and tender poem as this.
I suspect it was the illustration of that beautiful pink white rose that inspired this poem.
It is truly wonderful that things so lovely can survive.


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020



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    I agree. Thank you, Suzanna
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Hello Bill Schott
Oh I had to laugh at the way you tell us how you see your toes
I believe you have a great an unusual comparing your toes to the beautiful white roses
Gert


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020



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    Thanks, Gert

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    You are welcome Bill Schott
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A cleverly written verse Bill. I adore the photography and wish I knew the name of the rose. Your Tanka is concise and perfectly crafted! Good job. I would mention that in your subtitle, the word Tanka is misspelled. :)

Melissa


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020



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    It is a Thanka, Melissa. Tankas have rules.

reply by Sugarray77 on 17-Oct-2020
    Hahaha.... so fun!!

    M
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Hehehehehe, you do take the mickey, don't you? And you're so good at it. I loved this Thanka, and whatever follow in its wake. Very well done.Yo have such a great talent. Ulla:)))


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020



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    Thanks, Ulla, for the kind review, Bill
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Hahaha
First lowku and now thanka. I love your parody, Bill. I'll be watching where I place my feet, on the lookout for hidden treasure.

Stay safe and blessed

Julia


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    Thanks, Julia
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I like where this went. The logic, the message and the delivery. The image projects and suit the imagery . Well done Bill, good to read from you.
Have a great day.
RG


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    Thank you, RG
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