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Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Of the Dream"

Romance in a world of magic.

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Comment by
Michael Ludwinder
 
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Your chapter was enjoyable. The dialogue with Maximilian was interesting. I love how you move the story along and also give us information through the natural development of the story and using dialogue. Very interesting chapter.


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it. I'm glad it's coming out alright.
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Shirley McLain
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Another wonderful chapter to read. It is full of anticipation and then reward. I did not see any errors. You did an excellent job as always. Looking forward to the next one. Shirley


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it.
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