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A Morning Start


Just before leaving for work

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Bill Schott
 
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This spiral poem, A Morning Start, has the proper formatting and puts the reader at the dawn of a new and glorious day. We go out again.


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
    Hi Bill, thanks for your time taken to read and comment on my spiral poem.
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A Morning Start
by JLR

Hello, my friend,

Beautiful description of sunrise and a morning runner. I love the nature imagery. The presentation is beautiful too.


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
    Hi there! Thanks for your time taken to read and comment on my spiral poem.
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You take us with you as you describe your morning sky on a colourful start to your day before having to hurry off to work. Nicely penned Spiral Qatrain for the club JLR, enjoyed it. Cheers Valda


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
    Valda, smiling back, with great thanks!
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Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image, Jim.
-You did a good job with
the quatrains and rhyme
by creating a vivid word picture
of what you saw in "the glow
of the morning sun."
-There is a peaceful mood
because of how your day began.
-Hope it is a good one with
many more to come!
-Well done.


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
    Hi Pam, I do thank very much!

reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Oct-2020
    You are very welcome.
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Semper Fi
 
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Hi, Jim. There are so many good lines in this particular poem, it is hard to pick my favorite, but I think this one tops them all: So many great images.

"From my vantage point I see stars
lose their cosmic dance 'round Mars.
As the sky gives over
clouds shaped like clover,

Bless you, my friend. Bob


ps. I like reviews too, my friend. :)


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
    Hello dear friend, I am so very aware that I owe you some reviews, no excuses here. I have been losing computer time with Dr appointments, it seems that I ma going to have to have my chest cut open for a third time. The last open heart in January 8 , 2019 left me with a sternum that did not heal, so I need to have a titanium plate attached to the sternum to provide stability met with the surgeon to schedule this for Nov 8th. I will have a six - eight week recovery period where I will most certainly be doing some very committed reading and commenting..

reply by Mastery on 19-Oct-2020
    Get well, my friend. I am amazed and glad to see you still manage to post new work each day. Blessings. Bob

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
    It is what keeps me from taking too much pain meds....

reply by Mastery on 20-Oct-2020
    Yes. Bob
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Rhyme and rhythm is good. Descriptive words you use are very good. Hope you made it to work on time LOL Your poem has some bounce to it and I like that. Great job!
Patty


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
    Patty,, thanks so much!
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poetwatch
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Thank you, JLR, for this inspiring poem. I want to run :) on the beach in Boca Chica. Do a little fishing and watch the sun rise over the waters. I could use the high right now. As I sit behind this screen, all I do is dream. Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
    I smile back at the idea, have a running start!
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A very well-written spiral quatrain about starting a new day with hope and positivity is a great way to start and often lasts the whole day. A beautiful morning scene sets the mood.


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
    Sandra, thank you!
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I'm impressed that you find time for writing while you're still working. Most of us couldn't start until after retirement. Great job with your spiral quatrain poem with the perfect morning reflective mood.


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
    lyenochka, my working world is in fact now dedicated to writing everyday.
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Gloria ....
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Excellently descriptive language, J. Nothing too flowery either, but just that crisp start of a new day before heading off to work, in the rising sun, if the sun has risen yet.

Your serene artwork choice adds ambiance to a fine Stanzaic.

Always a pleasure to read and review.

Gloria


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
    Gloria, thank you, I wanted this to feel earthy to the reader.
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