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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Part 2 of 3"

A guru takes advantage of his student

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Ben B.
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Poor Garbrielle, as if she hadn't been through enough. Aiden sure has a funny definition for "freedom." This has to be by far one of the most brutal episodes of Xena I ever read about.


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
    Yeah, Aiden is a monster. I did make him worse, however... He gives me these vibes. :')
    Thanks for reading and rating!

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
    Did you see the conclusion? I hope you liked it. :)
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My! What a very visionary chapter this is. I must admit it both gave me the creeps and a thirst for reading more. I like the stammer stuttering, never read anything like this before. Excellent!


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
    Oh, thank you!
    Yes, the events herein are quite horrific, and poor little Gabrielle has trouble talking about them.

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
    Sorry?
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