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Scene at a Diner 3

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Fish eye swirl and cow tongue....eeeewww!! :) I'll have the gummy worms hold the tongue (LOL!)... ;) Another great one for the record books here, Bill -- thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

Comment Written 24-Oct-2020

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Thanks, Yvette. I wouldn't eat there.

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Okay, I think I'll pass on the sauces. Tomato sounds good to me. LOL, I think this dinner is going to be a disaster! I'll be chasing over to the next one now. Well done, Bill. I love Ned and Pons. :)) Sandra

Comment Written 24-Oct-2020

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Thanks, Sandra. Where is this diner? Right?

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Haaa, here we are with the dirty dozen doughnuts. I must say silencing that tongue was a stroke of genius.

I can imagine being a server and memorizing a menu might result in a little humour from time to time.

LOL. This is such good fun, Bill. :))

Gloria

Comment Written 23-Oct-2020

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Thank you, Gloria

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I was wondering if the server would ever get it all out, poor guy. He was probably thinking shut up and let me finish already. After all that they ask for ketchup. I imagine the server is pretty steamed, I'd be, lol.

Comment Written 23-Oct-2020

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Yes I was.

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Fish-eye swirl. Now that is just peachy. Server sounds like they know what to feed them. Be interesting to read the next part. These two always seem to have wild adventure going.

Comment Written 23-Oct-2020

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Thanks, Brett.

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Pons seems focused on the sauces, and he's so polite to the server. Personally, while I think tongue would definitely need some sauce, none of the dozen described sounds appealing. Ned approves, though. Maybe we'll get to hear more about the Dirty Doughnuts movie. Funny comment about the tongue speaking. As if in Tongues? Very amusing. judi

Comment Written 22-Oct-2020

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Thanks, Judi. Hed seems to be a comedian.

reply by judiverse on 23-Oct-2020

You're welcome. judi

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I'll have the bacon mustard please. When I was in French Commando School beef tongue was the second best meal. The First? Horse steak and French Fries. Thank you for sharing. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.

Comment Written 22-Oct-2020

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Mmmm. Cow tongue!

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Love these guys. Ned was definitely behind a door when they handed out common sense, eh?

"Ned: I gotta do the same thin' when I'm whistlin' a tune what I stopped. Instead a startin' in the middle, I gotta go back ta the beginnin'."

"Ned: As long as there's ketchup, I'm good ta go." (I know guys like that and a ketchup bottle is their life. LOL

Fish eye swirl sounds yummy, Bill

Great humorous segment.

Bob

Comment Written 21-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks, Bob. I'll try to get them through this meal soon.

reply by Mastery on 22-Oct-2020

LOL Bob

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Dear Bill, if you get two acknowledgments from me just ignore them both I guess! I think I did not press save on the first one.
I just wanted to say how much I appreciate your posts with all your silly characters. A perfect way to end my fan story day.

Comment Written 21-Oct-2020

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Thanks, Suzanna

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Fun
I enjoyed the servers repetition of some awful sounding sauces and always had to begin all over again.
Funny. Well done in continuing the diner.
Regards
Mary

Comment Written 21-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks, Mary

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