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Apple Of My Eye

Inspired by Gert

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Gert sherwood

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Smiles you have a couple of humorous sayings about -
Apple of My Eye this one is not comical sort or romantic
Lulube
You are the Apple in my eye and you'll stay in my heart.
NOTE:
Why don't you replace the apple blossom with an apple?
Gert

Comment Written 29-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020

I guess I made it more of a satyre with humor. thxs for checking it out and giving some tips. glad to see you have not left, do you know when you are vacating?

lulube

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Jannypan (Jan)

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You expressed your thoughts/feelings well on the apple of my eye clich�©. I enjoyed reading your well-thought out poem. I agree with you. I have never seen this occur and hope I never do.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment Written 23-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020

lol- thxs for your awesome comments and review

lulube

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Dorothy Farrell

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Hi you! This is great, another good write with your usual flippant attitude which makes me laugh, and that I need in these hard times. You're turning out the good work. Keep it up. Love Dorothy x

Comment Written 23-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020

great stuff then eh? hope it stays. thxs for another great review

lulube

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