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Apple Of My Eye


Inspired by Gert

  3 total reviews 
Comment by
Gert sherwood
 
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Smiles you have a couple of humorous sayings about -
Apple of My Eye this one is not comical sort or romantic
Lulube
You are the Apple in my eye and you'll stay in my heart.
NOTE:
Why don't you replace the apple blossom with an apple?
Gert


 Comment Written 29-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
    I guess I made it more of a satyre with humor. thxs for checking it out and giving some tips. glad to see you have not left, do you know when you are vacating?

    lulube
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Jannypan (Jan)
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You expressed your thoughts/feelings well on the apple of my eye cliché. I enjoyed reading your well-thought out poem. I agree with you. I have never seen this occur and hope I never do.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
    lol- thxs for your awesome comments and review


    lulube
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Dorothy Farrell
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Hi you! This is great, another good write with your usual flippant attitude which makes me laugh, and that I need in these hard times. You're turning out the good work. Keep it up. Love Dorothy x


 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
    great stuff then eh? hope it stays. thxs for another great review

    lulube
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