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Spider Costume


Camera not charged, sorry post later

  3 total reviews 
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Dorothy Farrell
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Hello Lori, 'Camera not charged, sorry post later' - that made me laugh. I admire your flippant, could not really care less attitude. A good story and a good read. Hope it does well in the contest. Good Luck - Dorothy xx


 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
    Maybe a short prayer would help for the contest? lol thxs for great supportive comments. I just started to get into introduction, then
    i was at the point of ending without being close to end. A lot of modifying for 50 words

    lulube
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Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written dribble flash fiction about the cute spider costume for your dog who seems to love showing it off. I can just imagine the spider running down the hallway.


 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
    So glad you have an imagination for the missing photo. and thxs for this review.

    lulube
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the13thpoet
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Hello Lulube, I hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your flash fiction with us. To tell a story in so few words is a challenge that I think you executed well. Good job!


 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
    why thank you! thxs for another review. I must check your work out too!

    lulube
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