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Camera not charged, sorry post later

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Dorothy Farrell

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Hello Lori, 'Camera not charged, sorry post later' - that made me laugh. I admire your flippant, could not really care less attitude. A good story and a good read. Hope it does well in the contest. Good Luck - Dorothy xx

Comment Written 23-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020

Maybe a short prayer would help for the contest? lol thxs for great supportive comments. I just started to get into introduction, then
i was at the point of ending without being close to end. A lot of modifying for 50 words

lulube

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Sandra du Plessis

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A very well-written dribble flash fiction about the cute spider costume for your dog who seems to love showing it off. I can just imagine the spider running down the hallway.

Comment Written 23-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020

So glad you have an imagination for the missing photo. and thxs for this review.

lulube

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the13thpoet

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Hello Lulube, I hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your flash fiction with us. To tell a story in so few words is a challenge that I think you executed well. Good job!

Comment Written 23-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020

why thank you! thxs for another review. I must check your work out too!

lulube

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