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The Vampire Sonnets-Part II


The Saga Continues

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Sallyo
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The First Turn
Your poetry, perceived, hath fourteen lines
And dealeth with unhappily undead
Perversely grateful to a vicious queen
Who bit the sense away from in his head.....


and so on. I'm glad you're getting this one going again:-) I can't find anything to complain about, and love the benefactors of bite line/.


 Comment Written 21-Apr-2006


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Hi David...

First you really had me chuckling with the (all caps): read the author notes.

Oh Boy! Do I unferstant that or what! Absolutely!

Sinve it's been some time, I think I got the Nona part mixed, but you do say 'and her coven' And then it did fit in..

But the saddest lines were:

"Looming above my first, I thought of her,
And of a past existence—now a blur"

ladykay

(Er... could you not have had the heroine doing some gala steps here in the poem?!!!)
Just kidding! would anyone dare ask this NOW!!!???






 Comment Written 21-Apr-2006


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Hahahhaa!!! I'm tempted to give you a *six* just for your "yoo-hoo" author note!

Wow, bro. This is a blast from the past. Nina and the boys kickin' and nickin' in the back streets of Chelsea, eh? I just got hit with a little wave of nostalgia. Mmmm...good times, good times.

I'm going to have to sharpen my quill and work on some pithy comments for you. I know how much you like them. :)

I don't have the energy tonight (sorry), but insightful and witty commentary to follow. This little snippet really illustrates, however, how masterfully you write in the form. I might brazenly say this level of skill is woefully lacking here at this time. Keep going, bro.

Sistah Sterling


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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ail29
 
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Hi there - I haven't read the other poems in this series (yet) but this sonnet is wonderfully written. True poetic story telling. Great work. Ail x


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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So what I did, David, is print out this sonnet BECAUSE I am really feeling challenged to write a sonnet. I tried one but it sort of didn't do so well and so I think I need a better teacher. So I will study on this and see if inspiration follows. Content wise I need to read all the chaptersthough vampires aren't exactly diane's cup of tea. But David's writing for sure is. diane


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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Hi, Dave! Where in the world have you been? You are off and running with some new ideas, I see. I know you will do well with this series, as you always do, your honor...LOL Bob (this one is one hell of a good write, by the way)


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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My dearest David- Read the notes
Which in my case was uneeded... but understand the need for them-
EXCELLANT and in this genre that is hard to do- Sonnets are difficult at best but I am sure if you entered the sonnet contest you would win it by a land slide-
I am not a fan of the Vampire theme but you make me want to read more before this and wait for whats next
Bravo- All out of 6's- dang!
Hugs
Diny


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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sellgirls
 
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Great sonnet; iambic pentameter is perfect. A creepy entry in your continuing saga. Let me guess...some reviewers didn't read your Author Notes? Am I warm? This really is going to be a cool book when complete. Not my favorite genre, but I appreciate your talent and still find a disturbing enjoyment reading them!


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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Beatlegirl61
 
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I have read a great many of these 'installments' so I sort of know where this has come from and where it's going...I really enjoy the theme, the sonnets are really brilliant and I hope to go back in time and read some of the 'chapters' I've missed!!
Thanks for the author's notes as well!
Wishing you peace and happiness always, Carol ::)

'Beatle' quote today" I would hate my disappointment to shoew..."

(No pun intended!!)

You are a very talented writer and I enjoy reading your work...later today I will probably take a 'delve' into your portfolio!! ::))


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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CaseyMezera
 
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Another great chapter.

Sometimes I can be a little slow but I've come to realize that it's almost an analogy to a queen bee and workers. I don't remember all the characters, so correct me if I'm wrong. We have Nina who is basically the Mother of the coven and then all the one's she created who are all men, right?

Nice writing

Casey


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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