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The Vampire Sonnets-Part II


The Saga Continues

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Walter L. Jones
 
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The First Turn
Smiles, for grave to save to earth not bound a voice so clear yet not a sound, day is better made for in the words you write, old night guy gets to walk again, and my coffee is just a bit better.. Hope the ink comes next.. best and better.. Walt

PS The write makes it worth the time, special stuff....


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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Sissy
 
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The First Turn
Hey David,

Way to hang us up with suspense. Thanks! (sarcasm here.)
I was all ready to find out about Maggie and we get vampiric reflections??!! :)
Whatever happened to instant gratification?

Oh yeah, this was awesome, by the way.

A deep immortal kiss, the rarest sort,
Would bargain blood for life, and cheat the grave
By tempering the thirst, the greed, the sport,
With something less perverse: the will to save.
(LOVED THIS!)

Take care,
Sissy


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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Nikita04
 
 
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The First Turn
I thought the poetry was well done - your poet is well balanced with the warrior! It always amazes me that wickedness is so alluring and seductive. I suppose that is what it does best! Great job!


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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SKYclad
 
 
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The First Turn
You know, I always like what I read when it comes to your work. I will have to check out more when time permits. Peace'
SkY


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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Dawn of Tomorrow
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of illusive love
 
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Rating of Chapter 39 -
The First Turn
Damn I hate the suspense in these. Get on with it!!! Maggie and I were talking about this last night. She asked if I thought you would actually turn Maggie. I told her, No I don't think so but then again he might surprise me. So here I wait and wait and wait....I still don't think so. I think I need a preview to the next chapter.


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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Lost Angel
 
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The First Turn
Once again, you've got me entranced with the absolute need-to-know feeling. I do hope you'll continue this, my friend, to whatever conclusion you have planned.


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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stroke
 
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The First Turn
Tristan can't even remember being human anymore. That's gotta be tough, and it makes me wonder if he really wants to go through with this. A great chapter, my friend.


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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fortescue
 
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The First Turn
A deep immortal kiss, the rarest sort,
Would bargain blood for life, and cheat the grave
By tempering the thirst, the greed, the sport,
With something less perverse: the will to save.

I love the language you use, the absolute mastery of form and content. Beautiful work, my friend.


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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Nelliebelle
 
 
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The First Turn
I love the delay, the nail-biting tendency you have to tease the reader. No one knows when the ultimate bite will be delivered, and I can't wait to see what'll happen with Maggie.

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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24chas
 
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Brilliant, brother. This one just had that flow of perfection as Tristan reflects on his own creation just as he's about to create his own vampire. Great stuff.

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2006


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