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That Dog


A cat fights with a ghost dog.

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Michael Ludwinder
 
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This is a fun and enjoyable poem. Great job. I love how you are sharing a unique story with your poem. Wonderful word choices and a creative and enjoyable poem.


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
    Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
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I expect animals have vivid imaginations just like humans do, I know they sometimes have nightmares and this sounds like a cat's nightmare to me, much fun, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
    Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
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Cynthia Adams1
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This is a very interesting poem. I never saw the ending coming.
I think I was messmerized by the picture of the dog...he looks so terrifying and his face is crooked.
I especially liked the last line.
I will remember your poem. Good work.


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
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Mary Vigasin
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I will tell you I enjoyed the surprise in the end when I was expecting a bloody end.
It was creative and clever.
One thing and it is only an opinion not a criticism. But the last line seems out of place. A cliché? i wonder if you need the last stanza?
Good luck in the contest. It is a surprising ghost story.


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    Thanks! The cliche is that the cat thought it was a live dog. I hope to win. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
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roof35
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This is an entertaining ghost story. Your picture pairs well. I didn't exactly see it coming either. Like that brave cat taking care of her human family. Nicely done.


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
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