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Viewing comments for Chapter 162 " Strive To Please The Lord"

One Bible verse a day to bless the reader

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This sapphonic triad, Strive to Please the Lord, has the right formatting and anticipates that God is always aware of peoples' actions for His glory.


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    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great Halloween weekend,
    Sandra.
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Your moving spiritual poem expresses a simple but deep faith in the Lord. Yes, we should strive to please Him. Look at wat He did--does--for us!
Note: "Sees" should be "see."


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    Have a great Halloween weekend,
    Sandra.
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May we all strive to please the Lord! Great job with your spiritual sapphonic triad poem. I liked that you chose that verse and am glad that the Lord wants to help us!


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2020


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    Have a great Halloween weekend,
    Sandra.
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I admired another of your spiritual, Sapponic Triad's and the matching picture. Keep striving to please the Lord and your fans! Continue to have a productive week- Joan


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    Have a great Halloween weekend,
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I wrote about this the other day, yes indeed, it actually requires that source of God's to be fully surrendered to whatever God chooses for them to be compliant. Beautifully written an excellent saphonic triad, well done, blessings Roy


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PI love this sweet and humble picture of Jesus. We are pleasing to God when we have faith in His son for forgiveness and salvation.

Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your day, Sally XOs......


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I surely liked reading this. Favorite lines: The eyes of God see everywhere; He seeks the hearts of all sincere. I just wanted to point out that it is "see" since eyes is a plural subject.


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2020


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    Have a great Halloween weekend,
    Sandra.
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Sandra, This is a very beautiful, well written and true Sapphonic poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2020


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    Have a great Halloween weekend,
    Sandra.
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Hello Sandra, This is a wonderfully executed Sapphonic Triad with all three parts adeptly crafted. I would mention that in the second stanza... the eyes of God.. see.. singular because the subject.. eyes is plural. Great verse.

Melissa


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    Have a great Halloween weekend,
    Sandra.
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What a different style of poetry you have followed with this poem. It was so very interesting to read the information at the end of your poem and thank you for including it. Even though the poem is excellent, as all of yours are that I have reviewed, I was amazed at the complexity of the style. Great job Sandra.


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2020


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    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great Halloween weekend,
    Sandra.
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