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This is certainly true. All it takes is one. So dad that some people do not care. This is a perfect picture for this little poem. What more can I say except this is very nicely done.


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    Thank you so much, There is so much still out in the ocean we dont see, but the sea creatures do.
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Very true. Even just one bit of trash can ruin the beauty of a natural setting. I hope that there will be future classes where kids would volunteer to clean the areas in their neighborhoods. Great message!


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    Thank you so much, There is so much still out in the ocean we dont see, but the sea creatures do.
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Excellent social commentary, Barb. Our littering definitely does destroy the planet's beauty and as you so aptly state, it only takes one.

A most enjoyable read today. :)

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    Thank you so much, There is so much still out in the ocean we dont see, but the sea creatures do.
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So true, one piece of trash is like a signal for others to do the same. Soon there is a dump site where once there was a pristine setting of natural beauty go figure. Thanks for sharing.


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    Thank you so much, There is so much still out in the ocean we don't see, but the sea creatures do.
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I love this poem. It really resonates with me. Lately I have been saying we should pause spending billions of dollars on our space program. We have made wonderful strides in our galaxy, but we have a pandemic on earth and people starving all the time. I keep saying what are we going to do, discover another planet to ruin? You would be surprised how many people agree with me! Nice work Barb, and great image!

Terry


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    Thank you so much, There is so much still out in the ocean we dont see, but the sea creatures do. I totally agree with your thinking

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    You are welcome. Have a great weekend!
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Another fine haiku, Barb---and mankind's arrogance and greed have made a shit-hole of our planet, that's for sure, and in our president, both are off the charts


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    Thank you so much, There is so much still out in the ocean we dont see, but the sea creatures do.
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Barb, This is a very well written 5-7-5 you have penned that is so full of the truth. You used very good descriptive words and very appropriate imagery. Thanks for the reminder and sharing. love and blessings, Teri


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    Thank you so much, There is so much still out in the ocean we dont see, but the sea creatures do.
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Oh how true, and I hate to see how the trash is building up on our beaches due to carelessness. I can remember as a child seeing trash on the beach and it has quadrupled since. A very positive message that all of us should pay attention to. Thank you for sharing.


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    And most of it has not landed yet and threatens the sea life. Thank you so much
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Your photo plus the poem truly convey your message. There is nothing I detest more than seeing litter on an otherwise beautiful setting. I have spent hours picking it up on my daily walks. Rod


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    And most of it has not landed yet and threatens the sea life. Thank you so much
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