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Goodness and Mercy


Part of a sermon on Psalm 23.

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Thank you for being inspired by your pastor and sharing the poem with us.
I am certain "Goodness" is following you and "Mercy follows close by". Cheers- Joan


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    Thank you for your review. Sadly many people don't remember one thing about what their pastor preached about.
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I read your author notes, and of course, being raised very Catholic, Psalm 23:6 is known by heart. But I love the part about goodness and mercy being the foot soldiers in our lives. You illustrated that well in your poem. Very well written, lovely image.


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    Thank you for the lovely review.

reply by Therese Caron on 03-Nov-2020
    You are welcome!
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I wish I had the ability and the gift of poetry like so many are blessed with on this site. A real poet should think and see things in a poetic way automatically, as you do.


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    Thank you for the lovely review.
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Stumble and fall in Mercy's lap, and then her sister Godnees supports you all the way. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and may the peace follow you around .


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    Thank you for the lovely review.
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It's always nice to know he's there to help us, guide us through life, that we're not alone. That he's there to catch us when we fall. This is a great interpretation of the 23rd psalm.


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    Thank you for the lovely review.
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I love this poem,, Patricia. Your words make the Psalm intimate and personal, just as the psalmist intended.

It brings me such relief to know that our God cares for us and that his angels stand ready to protect and encourage us whenever we weaken. And these days I find myself reaching out for help more than ever before.

Blessed assurance

Thank you for sharing.

Stay safe and blessed

Julia


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    Thank you for the lovely review.
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A very well-written poem and subtraction from Psalm 23 that is positive and uplifting to know goodness and mercy will follow us wherever we go and He is always ready to lift us up when we fall.


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    Thank you for the lovely review.
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Your poetry always makes me smile. I feel more faithful because you remind me of God's love and compassion. I pray daily for all the blessings I have, and I know, He has a plan for me.


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    Thank you for the lovely review.
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If we can show mercy to others then it will fill us with goodness Patricia, all too often people are critical and quick to judge these days, I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x


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    Thank you for the lovely review.
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Your ultra-concise poem is deeply spiritual and uplifting. It is so comforting for the believer to know that a Savior of grace, love, and mercy guides us--if we trust.


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    Thank you for the lovely review.
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