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1300 miles and losing so much weight you're an amazing lady. A go-getter for sure. Your story, journey is very well-written, interesting start to finish. Thank you for sharing it with us.


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
    Thank you for your lovely review. I hope you have a nice Sunday.
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Inspirational write, Patricia. I am amazed at your resolution and the wonderful results achieved by your persistence. You would make a great motivational speaker.
My in-laws in the UK abide by two rules of life. Endless cups of tea and walking regardless of weather and season. I remember icy cold walks along the muddy banks of a river as a constitutional after Christmas dinner. Brrrr

Stay safe and blessed
Julia


 Comment Written 05-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
    Thanks for your review.
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This is awesome. It clearly shows commitment to walking. I believe these words to be true walking is good for body mind and spirit. Love this those who walk with the lord will always reach their destination. Beautiful photo.


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    Thanks for your review.
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What a wonderful accomplishment, Patricia! I love walking and am sorry I have not been doing it as actively as before the virus hit. Still, it is never too late to do better. :-) This is a very motivating posting, my friend.


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    Thanks for your review.
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Oh, just getting out and moving and breathing in that fresh air -- a wonderful thing, isn't it? Really enjoyed your offering here, Patricia -- thanx for sharing! ;)


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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
    Thanks for your lovely review.
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This is quite a story about how your health as improved as you walked. I wish I could do that but I have knees that need replacing and walking causes me a lot of pain. I keep walking anyway but the more I walk, the more the pain. I am however able to swim without pain so I do that three times a week for an hour. I'm eighty-three and I know if we don't push ourselves we will become to stiff to move.


 Comment Written 05-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the review. I find when I stay in bed too long or sit too long that I get stiff.
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A very well-written piece about your love for walking and the benefits to your body, mind, and soul.

Typos that you can look at.
had a longer walked(walk) to and from schoo

After I had been able to walk thirty-two miles in a couple of weeks, I did return the placard to the DMV, {even though [it we good for my use for] six years.}(even though I could use it for six years.)


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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the review. Thanks also for catching the typos. The correction was made.
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Well done! Patricia. You are an inspiration to us all. If you fall off the horse, get back on and ride again. As they say, walking is the best exercise. This is a testimony, and also a call to action. Thank you so much for telling your story. Kudos on reaching your goal :)
hugs, Lucy


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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
    Thank you for your review.
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Good for you Patricia for your determination and strength.
I enjoyed reading your walking biography. It gives other people inspiration.
Watch out for those hot Arizona heatwaves when walking. My in-laws lived their and I know it can be a killer.
Regards,
Mary


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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
    Thank you for your review.
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