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November Moon


The eye that can not close

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amada
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You wrote here a very timely 5-7-5 poem. Your short lines are more dramatic in the tragic situation in our nation. Three lines that speak to our crushed mankind. Today.


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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
    Thank you, Amada. I'm happy it resonated with you.
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Awesome offering for the 5-7-5 contest here -- love the weaving of the moon and her 'designators' into your address of the current times.. ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)


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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
    Thank you, Y. M. Thank you for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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That was so clever, Jay, that last line where you use, lunacy with its double meaning, clinched it in my opinion. I think you have a winner here. Good luck, my friend. :)) Sandra xx


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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
    Sandra, thank you so much. You have more confidence in it than I.

reply by sandramitchell on 05-Nov-2020
    Have faith!! :)) xxx
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the moon's influence in nature as well as on the mind of many humans that goes absolutely lunatic at fool moon as well as at new moon when there us no vision of the moon.


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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
    Thank you, Sandra. You read this to the depth that was intended. I appreciate your time.
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This speaks the state and stand, nature and order of the Moon and her lunacy infinitely by which she keeps an eye over the earth; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

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    Many, many thanks, Alcreator. Your kind words warm me.
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This is a wonderful and beautiful poetry. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is well written. Well done. I like how you structured it. Good luck on the contest!

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 Comment Written 04-Nov-2020



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    Thanks, Raul. I'm happy you enjoyed it.

reply by Raul1 on 04-Nov-2020
    You're welcome.
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