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Covered In Autumn


A patchwork of leaves

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Elizabeth Emerald
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Witty and wise use of title--covered in autumn/patchwork of leaves--that's a 2-line bonus that beautifully expands upon the theme/imagery of the haiku itself. Lovely!


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020



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    Thanks for your kind remarks, I'm glad you liked my poem.
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the beauty of the outdoors. the beauty of nature. what capture our eyes capture the delight of the outdoors that nature brings. your poem was delighted to read. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

your so vein
godlucifer


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020



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    Thank you kindly for the review, so glad you liked it.
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Pleasant poem to read. Short poems are not always as easy as they may seem to write. This poem makes the reader want to enjoy the outdoors, observing nature and the beautiful colors of the trees and leaves on the ground. Good writing.


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    Thank you for the time in reading and commenting. It was very well appreciated.
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this enthusiastic, descriptive piece about the mesmerizing autumn sight of the
leaves changing colors and swirling in the wind.


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020



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    Thank you so much for your kind comments.
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Hi there, This is a good entry for a 5-7-5 contest the form not being as strict as a haiku. A haiku is always written in lover case and two sentences have to be grammatically interconnected. And the third line would be the line that says: Aw, this is what it is about.
Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020



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    Thank you, Ulla, for your kind comment.
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Hello R56,
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest.
The autumn leaves are very much like eye candy
that delight, as are the winds that swirl them around.
Good choice of art work to match the words.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert


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    Thank you so much for the review.
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I love the simile "like candy in one delight". The sweetness of candy overwhelms you so you can't think of anything else. I think this is what you mean? Even if you don't that's what the phrase means to me. Similarly I am sometimes overwhelmed by the beauty of nature. I am a bit sad at the moment and I realise I have forgotten how to appreciate something freely given. Thank you for your lovely poem. The picture is perfect with it. Kate


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    Thanks for your kind remarks.
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There's a few things going on here. The gold in the colour of the autumn leaves, but also in the candy, but I think not that I've thought of that, but a good satori line, well done, good luck, blessings Roy


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This is a good one. Perfectly descriptive of Mother Nature's workings. But the way you splashed the imagery of Orange sprite delight was done expertly.like candy in the wind. Yes!


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One never tires of the visionary delight of Autumn's scenery, notably the leaves. The magnificence of the colours and how they enfold the land is priceless.
Lovely presentation.

Ralf


 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020


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