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tracing shadows lurking

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Y. M. Roger
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Just wait long enough and those masks will slip and all will be revealed... time not only heals all wounds but it is a wonderful forensic scientist in truth revelation, isn't it? There's a dark side to those 'rising' before us now... we just have to hold onto real truth and discern it through the lies. Thanx for sharing, Lady Ronni -- love the thought-provocation in this one!! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
    Hi dear Yvette,
    You are so right here, can't add much more to that! This originally
    was personal flash back, real evil, real betrayal come back to haunt.
    But it also fits so well with the evil of the times and perils, so left
    on. Timely warnings for some hopefully. Home you finally
    got some sunshine your way dear!!! Miss you lots!! :) ;)
    Love, blessings, always, Ronni
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Joan E.
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Your "tracing shadows lurkking" is mystical and mesmerizing. And you selected the perfect matching. I especially admired your "fate's portfolio" metaphor and "karrmic destiny". Well done- Joan


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
    Hi there Joan,
    Thank you Joan for your insightful comments on this one, which meant as a 'think piece' and reflection of the current and increasing
    wickedness in the world, and the kind of people or groups that
    perpetuate it; later occurred to me it was perhaps indeed too much
    of a 'think piece', but experimental venture nonetheless.
    I appreciate your noted portions deemed as especially effective
    and expressive.
    I hope you are enjoying wearing your 'signature hat', also
    simultaneously complimenting your 'signature style' poetic
    writings. Both very becoming indeed.
    Hats & Hugs, Ronni

reply by Joan E. on 12-Nov-2020
    Today, it's a Beret and yesterday, a kin of cap--it depends on my mood and the color combination. Thanks again for sharing your experimental venture. Keep probing deep thoughts- Joan

reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
    Great for you, that is exactly
    the way to choose a hat to
    wear; according to mood and
    attire color coordination. Keep up the spirit of it and
    have fun with them too!
    Happy hats and hugs always,
    Have a gorgeous weekend!
    Ronni

reply by Joan E. on 12-Nov-2020
    Have a hat and hug-filled weekend! Big smiles- Joan
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Sally Law
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Wow, this is deep, dark and spiritual. It's only when we search ourselves with God's light that these deceptions are revealed and we can turn from them. If we don't, they become actions and sins that take us down.

Sending you my best today as always for this marvelous work,
Sal XOs....xo.....


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
    Hi dear Sally,
    You aced this one so perfectly dear. I thought it might come across as a too deep a 'think piece' for many; but went with as experiment.
    Thanks again for your superb introspections and great comments,
    Have a beautiful week, beautiful friend.....;) :)
    Love, blessings always! Ronni
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Congratulations on this melancholy piece. To be honest I don't fully understand it, but the words flow well. The image and colors you've used complement your poem well.


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
    Hi there Little Bird,
    Thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments on this.
    I thought this might come across as too much of a 'think piece'
    but went with the experiment to see if it turns out that way,
    Actually, what this reflects on is all the evil and wickedness
    going on in our times now, and attempts to describe how such
    deceptive people seem to reveal the depth and scope of their
    decadence and insurrections right before our eyes, like
    peeking into their own depraved journal, as cue in picture.
    Thank you for your most conscientious and thoughtful
    reflections on this, and sharing them so appreciably!
    Also, thanks for the extra 6th star... gratefully indeed!
    Best wishes with gratitude, Ronni
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