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Focus On Jesus


Rhyming faith poem.

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Spangle
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I just read some of the Psalms this morning and your lovely poem follows the theme of many of them. We can trust in the Lord to be there with us in whatever difficulties we are facing...especially like now when the nation is in such political distress. xo


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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
    Thanks for your lovely review.
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A very well-written rhyming faith poem about setting your focus on p Jesus without a doubt in your heart and He will guide us through the storm around us without any effect on our inner peace


 Comment Written 11-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
    Thanks for your nice review.
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Joanne Gill
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This is a nicely written poem. I Love your wording. If we'll focus on Jesus and not on the storm. We'll know his peace we'll never feel alarm. Very lovely photo to represent your words.


 Comment Written 11-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
    Thanks for your nice review.
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This is so beautifully written. Personally I feel like writing something such as 'We'll ALL know his peace, we'll never feel alarm' would flow better than 'we'll know his peace, we'll never feel alarm' because of the extra syllable and the lack of repetition. With that said, that is the only thing I can come up with because it is so hard to criticise your work. You truly have a writing talent and I admire your ability to express your faith so beautifully. God Bless.


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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
    Thanks for your nice review.
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Your uplifting poem vividly describes the mindset and spiritual
condition--never being alarmed--of those completely focused on Jesus.
Sometimes I do get alarmed; I apparently have a long way to go. :-)


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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the review.
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What a very well-written, spiritual poem. It's something we all need to read, be reminded of with all the turmoil that's going on today. That all this chaos is all a part of his plan. One thing for sure, it's a big test of faith.


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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the review.
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"Thou will keep him in perfect peace whose mind is stayed on him, because he trusteth in Him"
Excellent poem and message. This voter's
focus has been on the Lord all the time; I'm not too happy with whom God voted for, but He is God's Man of the Hour and will keep him in line. Your Sibling in Christ -Jerry


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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the review.
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You did you do the artwork here Patricia? A fine uplifting write filled with faithful words that bring us peace and quell our fears Patricia, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the review. Not my art work, I found it on the internet some time ago.
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I enjoyed this Patricia and the message it sends.
In this turbulent times, comforting words are needed.
Well done on the rhyming.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary


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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the review.
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This is very good advice in this rhyming poem. I love the picture you picked. Good luck with the contest. I saw one word that needs to be fixed.

liftifting us up lifting us up.


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
    Thanks for your review. Also, thanks for catching the typo. The typo is fixed.
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