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Return To Me


I have lost my muse, again

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Father Flaps
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Hi Jay,
You tell my tale. Much too often, I'm blank. Like, there's nothing upstairs. My life is a bungalow. One floor.
I enjoyed your poem very much. Your phrase, "return to me", caused the song by the same name to play in my head. Dean Martin, I think... yes!
https://youtu.be/EpBjgQlT_jA
My favorite lines,
"Twill make me happy, like a bride,
with you as my poetic guide."
Oh-oh! Now I've got an image of you in a bridal gown, Jay! Sorry about that.
Nicely penned, as usual!
Cheers,
Kimbob


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020


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Oh this is a fine metre about your muse who has taken off on a holiday. Have you tried tempting her with a delicious slice of three-cheese pizza? I find that sometimes works, and another thing that sometimes works is to pretend you are glad to be finally rid of your annoying little muse once and for all. Muses hate being ignored. ;-)

A fun poem, and it seems your muse is still very much alive and well friend, Jay. :))

Gloria


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020


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You always have a way of finding the worlds that shoot straight to the heart. We need our muses you guide us and help us speak to the souls of our fellow man.


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I often ask myself, do we need power to be a writer? My answer is no because there's dignity in writing, also writing gives us strength through our words. So in your own thinking, you absorb your own muse.

(Basic Skills that Writers Need. 1. Good Language Skills. To be a writer, you need to have good language skills. 2. Ability to Generate New Ideas. 3. Good Research Skills. 4. Thoroughness. 5. People Skills.)


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Indeed, Jay. As you say you would be dead in the water. So far, it's never happened to me. I seem always to have something to say. I'm so sorry if you're afflicted by it. I loved your poem. Ulla:)))


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I find that reading ignites my ability to meditate or think on different subjects. Musing will disappear while the mind is empty, but it can be rekindled with food for thought.


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Wow and bravo dear jaybird! This is an exceptional piece of poetry! I love the philosophical sentiment and the insightful as well as inspiring poem.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x


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-I appreciate your note
and your poem, jaybird.
-I think your muse has done
a great job, and is deserving
of my last 6 star rating for the week!
-I enjoyed reading this with
your plea to your muse.
-I agree that you do try to
"write on the lighter side," and
it is much appreciated.
-I like your comparison to
a bride, and your closing couplet, too.
-Have a great day and good weekend!


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020


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ESOSTINE
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We some times get to that point when we long to write but the words and rhymes to express our thoughts and feelings tend to elude us. You are not alone dear, Jay. Lolo!


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020


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hi there,
it might me just a coincidence or a case of amorphic learning, but minutes ago I wrote a review about a muse. Muses move in strange ways.
- Lobber


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