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Owed to Mother


Honoring my mother

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Deniz,

This is so precious! It's very clear you mother was a fine example in her everyday work, but you're right, the biggest and best thing we can give our children is to love their fathers and to love THE FATHER most of all.

Thanks so much!


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
    Hi Robyn, thank you and it?s good to know you are still gracing this site with your presence! 👏👏👏
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very touching and loving about your precious mother
your words are a good choice to enhance your well pinned poem
the photo went perfect to make this come to life and
believable and you have so much talent
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing


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    Thank you for your kind words!
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I love your beautiful tribute to your mother Dennis. Reading your words made me love your mother too. I feel as if I know her, which says a lot about your ability to bring her to life through your words. What a lovely person she was! No wonder she raised such a delightful son. Thank you for sharing this poem. You have honored her with your words as well as your life. MM


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020



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    Thank you so much! My life has been blessed by Godly women and I long ago added you. Blessings, dear sister in the Lord, Dennis
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This well-rhymed poem is a fine tribute to your mother, how she raised you, and her faith (acquired by reading the Bible. as you mention in your notes). May she rest in peace.

My own mother (a teacher) was a major factor in my focus on learning,which is a joyous process still going on as I approach your age.

I like the play on "ode" in the title, and also the repetition of the last line in each stanza to emphasize the theme. Superb.


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020



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    Thank you so much!

reply by WalkerMan on 22-Nov-2020
    You are most welcome. -- Mike
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This is a very good tribute in poetry to a mother who lived a Godly life and prayed for you and led you to God. I had a mother like that as well. I thank God for my mother who never gave up on me.


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    Godly mothers are the gift of God to their families. Glad you had one too!
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This is a very beautifully written poem. Great flow and rhyme scheme. Nicely done. I lost my mother 1 year ago and I miss her so much. There's no one else quite like your mother.


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    Oh, I?m sorry. I hope you can take comfort in knowing the One who is powerful enough to put the stars in space is also gentle to heal the broken-hearted. God bless you, Dennis
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Deniz22,
Consider yourself surrounded by your mother's sweet loving arms- as your poem is revealed here.
Beautiful tribute to your mother and her love for you and your respect for how she raised you.
At age 84- you are a mother figure to us all- may Spirit bless you dear lady.
Sammielwf


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020



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    Thank you so much! But actually, I am a man. My name on here is misleading (my bad for choosing it) so you aren?t the first to make this assumption.
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Our mother's are our gifts from God. I couldn't have been given a better mother if I'd searched the universe. I miss her terribly. Your poem is fabulous, Denis, it shows your love and admiration for the lady that brought you up to be who you are today. Your mother. We will all meet again, my friend, which is such a lovely thought. Death is not an ending, it's the beginning. Well done! :)) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020



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    Thank you so much!
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I envy you for having such a beautiful and loving mother. I lost mine very young.
Your mother certainly has God's blessings by her faith and mother's love.
Well written tribute to her by her loving son.
Mary
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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020



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    Thank you so much!
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This is an awesome tribute to your mother and i can see her smiling down from heaven with love for her son. Your words show love and the importance of believing in God as a parent.


 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
    Thank you for your kind words. Very appreciated and God bless you.
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