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How Mother Found Jesus

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This is a beautiful story of redemption. I would be hard to live up the scripture you quoted but your mother must have come close to ideal if all her children and grandchildren found God through influence. Thank you for sharing.


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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much!
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What a wonderful, heart-warming story. One woman's faith passed on to so many others. What a lovely legacy she left you all. So glad you shared this with us.


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much!
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thaities, Rebecca V.
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What a wonderful example your mother is to those who knew her and now to those who hear about her. Reading the Bible daily is best education I ever received.


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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much!
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A very well-written heartfelt story about a praying mother always have her children's best interests at heart and she will pray day and night for her children's souls to be saved.


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much!
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There's not many women like your wife, my Elaine comes close, a woman of sacrifice, my girls have carried Elaine's integrity in to generation of grandchildren, she makes me look good, my son in law's grandmother is a great matriarch, she spent the last two days of her life praising with sons and daughters 10 children 4 pastors, and 3 pastor's wife's, her children when they went astray, were afraid of her prayers, but they were there. Beautifully written, blessings Roy


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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much, Roy!

reply by royowen on 22-Nov-2020
    Well done
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This is indeed a beautiful story of your mother's conversion and of the long-lasting impact of her prayers for all her family and extended family. A lovely tribute to her faith.


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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much!
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Aww Brother Dennis, what a sweet testimony of your Mother. With a praying Mother such as yours,
you and your siblings and Grand children couldn't not be saved. Praise the Lord! YBIC Jerry


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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much my dear brother! Even more extraordinary was my Dad?s conversion largely due to her influence. Story for another time perhaps. Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family, Dennis
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Powerful tribute--wry humor--I DROVE her/she led me. In this short piece you skillfully convey her conversion experience and how she brought the family to Jesus. (hyphenate life-giving)



 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
    Thanks! I just wrote a review on your clever piece where you talk to yourself. Reminds me of a friend who had that habit and when I called him on it, he said, "I have to talk to someone intelligent once in a while!" I'm off to hyphenate-now!
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You have surely written a loving and moving poem about your mother.
It is wonderful that you can credit her for so much of your success. I hope she lived to see it.
Nice job.
Your story is well-written and flows well.
Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours.


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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
    Thank you, and a happy Thanksgiving to you amd your family as well.
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