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Life in Uncertain times

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It is interesting how you use the word 'to'. I works as a stressed syllable in the line of trochaic substitution in the final quatrain and as an unstressed one in the iambic line that begins the final couplet.

In line 4 you might consider 'as best I could'. That is the way I am used to but this could be a cultural difference. It is not really important.

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
    Hi Jim. Thank you. I appreciate your review and agreed with your suggestion and substituted.. as.. :)

    Melissa
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Our journey through life just now is met with many hurdles we need to clear in order to life well, if we keep our faith, we will succeed as you did here, a fine poem, much enjoyed Melissa, love Dolly x

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    Thank you so much Dolly!! Glad you enjoyed it.

    Melissa
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