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20 syllables

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Dorothy Farrell
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Hello Lori, exactly twenty syllable - well done! Not easy to get a message over with the restrictions of just twenty syllables. You have done well with this - nothing forced to meet this challenge. Good work - love Dorothy xx


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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
    thxs Dorothy, I never entered in any contest, just thought I'd use the style. lol

    lulube
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Standing on the sidelines 'waiting and seeing' might be all right for some, but it lets unscrupulous people actively undermine democracy. We must be alert to how we can all 'make life better', not leave it up to others. It's not up to the world to make life better, it's up to ourselves.


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    thxs for your point of view, in more depth that I agree with. definitely finding solutions to your own situation must come from yourself but it is the rest of the world that one must wait to see how they manage this situation.

    lulube
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Your three line poem has it summed up, and it's a question we all need to ask ourselves, and maybe be proactive in answering. Lovely image to accompany.


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    thxs for your great comments. and commenting on photo. I took this photo 5 min. from my home. It just wanted to get posted. lol

    lulube
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