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Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a good job with your contest entry. I like the way you started with the note. Your image is perfect. The story told in these 75 words seems believable for one so in love. It would give great comfort to her even if a friend wrote the note, right. Best wishes. Jan


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020


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Susan X Smith
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I do believe in an afterlife, but this is stretching it a bit. I can only guess that a concerned friend left it there for her on behalf of her late husband. Nice story, though.


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thanks for your review. Whether it was meant for her or not doesn't really matter. In her mind it was enough to give closure.
    Geoff
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equestrik
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This is sweet and well done-could be the foundation for a Nickolas Sparks's movie. Yoou did well pairing your words with this picture. This is a very sweet/sad write.


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thanks for your review. I'm gonna have to educate myself on Nickolas Sparks
    Geoff
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Ann Market
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This poem took me through a catharsis of emotions! From the heartbreak in the beginning to the heart-warming note at the end, I sincerely enjoyed this! Good luck to you in the contest!


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thanks a lot for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
    Geoff
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ESOSTINE
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The story presented the usual picture of the misery of losing a loved one- the feelings never die. It really kept me spell-bound as I read along.
Thanks for sharing your inspiration, and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed
    Geoff
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thaities, Rebecca V.
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What a sweet entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest. Grief is a huge mountain to climb and writing is one way to see the summit. Well done!


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020


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