You did a good job with your contest entry. I like the way you started with the note. Your image is perfect. The story told in these 75 words seems believable for one so in love. It would give great comfort to her even if a friend wrote the note, right. Best wishes. Jan
The story presented the usual picture of the misery of losing a loved one- the feelings never die. It really kept me spell-bound as I read along.
Thanks for sharing your inspiration, and good luck in the contest.