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Jaw Jacks Number One


A Closer Look At A Biden Policy

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Ric Myworld
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Well, I don't talk politics with anyone. And this election makes it harder than ever, since neither candidate is capable of running bath water effectively. Out of almost 400 million people in America, I'm ashamed and embarrassed that these are the best two candidates we could come up with. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 24-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
    I do not normally talk politics either. This was an exception because I totally support the death penalty and want to see what the panty waste Biden does on this topic. As always, appreciate your comments and the review.

reply by Ric Myworld on 24-Nov-2020
    I too support the death penalty. And, I'm also concerned that Biden will try to pick up with Iran where Obama screwed up before.
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A very well-written jaw jacks opinion about the politics in the USA make the world grind their teeth including me. We see the illegal things going on there, more than many Americans, who truly believe Biden won the election fair and square.


 Comment Written 24-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
    Appreciate the review.
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What does the dumb money ask?
I won't get into the politics of it, only the writing.
I like the straightforward way you presented your point of view in the first stanzas. To my mind, the last line weakens your case a bit.
I thought you were presenting a case for capital punishment and your fears Baden will not allow it. That would be an interesting and reasonable debate.
The last line turns it more into an anti-Biden political statement.
I am sooo tired of politics and especially tired of nearly everyone, on every side, (like press secretaries) giving sound bites that they think will help them politically, regardless of what is right or true.


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
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Hi Brett, the rest of the Western world has abolished, the death penalty many, many years ago, and it works. That doesn't make us socialist. Where have so many of you got that stupid notion from? I'm half American and I'm getting angry. What is wrong with trying to better peoples life? In Europe we got free health care, we don't pay a cent. That is what is called a welfare state. You don't have that. No money and you are on the street. Or at best you die from not being able to pay for your treatment.
I'm angry, Sorry, and I took it out on you. Just all of you, get a life, and look at reality. My brother voted for Trump, but he agrees with me. Mute me, or whatever, but you all exasperate me. Ulla:)))


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
    Why would I mute you over your opinion? I find that to be hysterical. Everyone is entitled to one. Doesn't necessarily make you right. I am very pro the death penalty. That does not necessarily make me wrong. Glad to receive your thoughts and appreciate the review. Take care for now. Talk again soon.

reply by Ulla on 23-Nov-2020
    Well, so be it. But I'm not hysterical. I'm just angry, is all. We talk again soon as you say.

reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
    Did not say you were hysterical. I said the notion I would mute you for your opinion I thought was hysterical, and I do, as in funny. We've known each other on this site for how long?

reply by Ulla on 23-Nov-2020
    I know, Brett, please do forget what I said there. My temper was just up. I hope you have seen my response to the thumbs up you just gave me. I so appreciate it. We are friends. Ulla:)))
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Yep, most definitely a LEFTARD, Bro! There is that scripture that no one abides by that says "them that take the blood - of them shall their blood be required" My version I guess. I think these pollies are afraid some friend of theirs would be executed and that is why they oppose the death penalty.


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
    Still debating what to do. Got one week to decide. Appreciate the review.
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Yeah Brett, I'm surprised at how many ignorant people voted for this
socialist. it's possible they did not vote FOR him, but were voting AGAINST Pres. Trump.


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
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If Biden is allowed to do many things he has said or Harris has said they will do, I am truly afraid for the future of our country. I hope it doesn't happen. Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
    Glad you enjoyed this posting and much appreciate the review.
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I shudder to think what he might do! I'm more interested in how long they'll keep him up front while pulling the strings in the background. I'm afraid we're headed for some disastrous times. Or rather, more of them.


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Much appreciate your insights and the review.
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Biden is a person who will uphold the law as it is written in spite of what he may feel on the issue. Personally he doesn't believe in abortion, but he says he will uphold the law as it is written. I would expect he will do the same with the death penalty. Personally I appose the death penalty,but I was unaware he that he does. I would like to see it abolished but I don't expect that to happen.


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
    Always appreciate your insights and reviews.
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I appreciate your thoughts on the subject. I believe Biden will be soft on crime in general. He didn't seem to think all the rioting and looting going on was a big problem, and really didn't address the violence some of our cities were experiencing. He will no doubt "duck" the issue. Your presentation is well reasoned and clear. judi


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your insights and the review.

reply by judiverse on 15-Mar-2021
    You're very welcome. judi
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