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A 1-6-1 poem of life.

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Our time, my time, your time... time will get us all in the end. And what will our end be? A blessing or a curse? Full of tears or smiles? Forget about death and live for good stuff.


 Comment Written 01-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Jenny. I saw my birthday knocking at my heart. :)
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totally our own time is our death. Love your notes. Time is a blessing and a curse. Love all the extra knowledge but love the look, not so much. lol cute photo

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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2020


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    Thank you Lulube. :) Wrote this for the contest to see if I could get some votes. Just some words on the screen.
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A poignant write as time never slows, but marches forward and when we age we get used to the speed that it seems to tick at, the older we get the faster it goes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2020


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    Thank you, Dolly. :)
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Nicely written 1-6-1 poem. Time when death walks on my line. Mine. Time is a blessing and a curse so true. Awesome photo. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 24-Nov-2020


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    Thank you, Joanne. :) Time will tell.
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I confess that I don't get the full message--line three in particular puzzles me--nonetheless, the startling and fresh second line earns your stars in itself. Good luck.


 Comment Written 24-Nov-2020


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    Thank you, Elizabeth. :) Mine is for my time to walk the line.
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Thank you for a well written poem. It is a reminder to us that time is a double-edged sword. Value it, but accept that our time is relatively short. Best wishes for the contest.


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
    Thank you, Wendy. :) Some time cuts deep
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Congratulations on this moving piece. The image you've selected complements your work very well; it's like it was made for it. I'm turning 30 soon and am facing a bit of a existential crisis myself. Good luck with the competition!


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
    Well, A Little Bird, fresh of the nest. :) If you add 30 + 10 more you would be in line with my time. :) Glad you see.
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Time does wonders to our looks...we look in the mirror and ask us why we have so many wrinkles, how did my hair get so grey and then you see the sagging wrinkles under your eyes. Did I worry so much? Or did I laugh so hard I cried?


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
    Thank you, Rosemary. :) The mirror is just a mirror of our soul, the lines are memories.
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very well done how old age comes quickly
your words are a good choice to enhance your well pinned poem
the photo went perfect to make this come to life and
believable and you have so much talent
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing
I hope the best in the contest


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
    Thank you, donette. :) I'm glad you liked it.
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