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A CUBE16 (double-header)

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Comment by
Spangle
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Trump has had many accomplishments and I think his Warp Speed work is especially noteworthy. You could have entered this in the Tell a Story in a Poem contest, Robert. It is honest and true, as well. :-)


 Comment Written 28-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
    Hi Janet.

    Thank you for reviewing this post. I appreciate and agree with your remarks about Trump. We will miss him when he is out of office. I am very uncomfortable le with Biden and his VP.

    I've given up on contests.

    Robert
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Excellent. Biden is pond life on so many levels. He is a video documented peddo along with his son, and has no policy opinions other than what has been fed to him by Obama and Hillary Clinton. I have watched the US election circus from the safety of Australia. What a jaw dropping travesty of your Constitution. Trump has been crucified. The man is difficult, but he sorted China, Korea and Iran with his "fuck you" policies. All the economic stays are a matter of record but the democratic owned mainstream media would not go there because it did not suit their narrative. Sorry pal, but you guys are in trouble - DJ


 Comment Written 27-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
    Hello DJ.

    Thanks for the positive and meaningful review. You understand our Constitution better than the vast majority of Americans. We are in trouble for certain.

    Circus is an appropriate term for the election. In some jurisdictions, there were more votes cast than there were registered voters. The political left here carries on the Marxist traditions.

    Trump is the only President since Reagan that has stood up against America's enemies and you named them. I have referred people to the China 2025 strategic plan. That is their plan to displace Western democracies and to become the super power of the world. The America haters will not like them very much when they are dominant.

    Thank you for the six stars. You certainly have a real handle on what is happening. Biden wants to give amnesty to the illegal aliens living in America right away. That number is about the population of Australia. He says it is just 11,000,000. Nobody really believes that. The illegals are already staging on our southern border. They are ready to rush in here the day Biden becomes president.

    Thanks for reading and commenting.

    Robert

reply by djsaxon on 28-Nov-2020
    Thanks Robert. Trump is a Twitter obsessed narcissist who persists on doing himself damage with every Tweet. Can someone please take away his laptop or amputate his fingers? Just sayin'. Thing is, NO ONE will acknowledge what he has achieved. His aggressive foreign policy sits pretty well with me. The lefties bleat about the economy but it is in a far better place than it was under Obama, COVID notwithstanding. Trump announced that there was a .vaccine in place and was vilified as a liar. The very next day Pfizer made an announcement together with anticipated success rate percentages. Reported without bias? Nah. China is way past scary. I wrote this way back.

    PAY THE PANDA

    A rare bamboo
    China calling
    Feeding a new green to an unsuspecting world
    An orchestrated catastrophe in black and white

    No transparency
    Just furry lies
    Few lives lost in a nation of one and a half billion people
    Spread the word

    China owns Australia
    Economic dominance
    Little left to grab in the Pacific
    Let COVID do its job and bring the world to its economic knees
    Spread the word

    I am learning Mandarin
    It may take a while
    At least I will still be able to order take out
    Rice and noodles
    A side order of dog
    Contact free

    D J SAXON 2020

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
    Hello DJ.

    The American press is corrupt just like social media. Why anybody participates in that stuff is foreign to me.

    I like "Pay the Panda" a LOT! You are right on the money and I like the free verse style you used. I know millions of people hate America. They might think differently when the Chinese navy is docking in their ports. Trump is putting the heat on them but Biden will let them up. The happiest people in the world about Biden being elected are China, Iran, NOKO, Russia and 80% of the people on FS. HA

    Robert

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
    A correction.

    80% of the people on FS just hate Trump. They might like America. HAHA

reply by djsaxon on 28-Nov-2020
    Hi Robert. There are a few FS believers out there but I would not need to remove my shoes to complete the count. Maybe even leave one glove on. - DJ
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Sigh.

I have heard politicians of all persuasions give our Lame Duck President credit for Warp Speed. Nothing I say will change your point of view, I know. You and I have volleyed back and forth on the political tennis court for a long time. I say who cares who gets the credit? Can we not ALL agree that a vaccine (much less three!) so close to being approved and possible ready to be injected in the arms of our first responders first, our most vulnerable second and so on is WONDERFUL news! I pray Donald Trump gets vaccinations up and going as soon as they are approved...which should be when he is still president. I pray equally fervently that Joe Biden ha equal success continuing the vaccination program when he is sworn in as president January 20, 2021. We ALL win, regardless of party, if the pandemic is wiped out. Please don't preach to me about Joe accusing a reporter of shouting a question. If we're going to grade on presidential etiquette, even on a Bell Curve, Trump loses. --Karenina (PS--I can like YOU and not agree with your point of view! :) )--Karenina


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
    Hello K.

    Unlike the hard political left and the media, I don't demand people agree with my point of view.

    I was not preaching to you about Biden not answering a question. He has not answered a real question in months. Trump was asked if he felt guilty about the people that died of coronavirus. Biden was asked what flavor milkshake he just bought.

    Objectivity in the press is nonexistent and now we know that the tech industry censors conservatives. They got caught. They admitted it.

    I don't need to condemn the political left with my words. Their words and actions speak for themselves.

    Robert

reply by karenina on 27-Nov-2020
    Were you preaching? Were we arguing? I don't think so... I did not feel it that way... NO secret media has their agenda...more clear cut than any candidate! It's a shame...mostly a shame because there are far too FEW like you and I that look beyond the makeup and teleprompters and (GOD FORBID!)--dare to question the status quo!--Karenina

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
    Hello K.

    I wasn't preaching, but you did tell me not to preach to you about Biden not answering the reporter.

    I question everything. That's why my popularity has diminished on FS. I don't care about the popularity. If I did, I would just say ugly things about Trump in my clever way and all would be good.

    I wrote a poem about the virus months ago and referred to it as a "Pale Horse." That time, I was told to keep religion out of my writing by one of the so-called writers on here. I very seldom get criticized for my technique or writing style; always for content.

    Robert
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Once again your versatile Cube 16 form is effective for your message.

The more I see what is happening around the world in connection with this virus, the more I think it is either a plot by the Communist leaders of China and/or the Globalists to crash successful Capitalist economies and depopulate the world, starting with older people who remember the truth of the past and are most likely to resist tyranny.

Thus, the vote fraud perpetrated mainly through mail-in balloting "justified" by the virus risk, plus the rigged Dominion voting machines put in place in thirty-three states this year, is to assure that Biden wins, allowing all past and present leftist Democrat and supporting corrupt "news" media chicanery to be hidden permanently. Obama has had a hand in this all along, and he will be pulling Biden's (and/or Harris's) strings, amounting to an illegal third term (and possibly more) for him.

Yes, the corrupt media will bolster Biden's attempt to claim credit for Trump's success in getting multiple vaccines out so fast. In any case, unless I know exactly what is and is not in a vaccine, I'll trust my own strong immune system more. If it is made mandatory, or foisted on us by being a requirement for nearly everything, then I'll consider it either a danger in itself or the equivalent of the Biblical "mark of the beast" -- or both. Such is the path to world tyranny.

Biden does not answer serious questions because, like all leftists today, he knows that the majority of the public would not like his answer. That is what he avoided by staying home so much during the campaign. He did not worry about doing that because he had been assured the fix was in, which we now know it was.


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
    Hello Mike.

    Thank you very much for this six Star review and your cogent remarks. I agree with your comments.

    I have actually written a short on the Biblical "mark of the beast." I compare the mark to a smartphone. What is disappointing to me is the general apathy/ignorance of what is happening in our world. 2 Thessalonians 2:9-12 says in the end times God will send a strong delusion over the world and even the "elect" might be deceived.

    I have no doubt that Obama will have his tentacles in the Biden administration. He will end up in the government somewhere. In addition to his $14 million house at Martha's Vineyard and his house in Hawaii, he lives in a leased $8 million house down the street from the White House. He never left Washington and never will. I'm convinced he told Biden to select Harris as VP.

    I have always believed China is complicit in the covid-19 spread, and possibly development.

    Robert

reply by WalkerMan on 27-Nov-2020
    You are most welcome, Robert.

    Yes, smartphones allow people with them to be tracked, and even spied upon. Also, the new 5G phones operate on frequencies harmful to all forms of life.

    You are right that ignorance and apathy are the path to loss of all that matters; and the schools and "news" media have been pushing that for so long that the results are now evident.

    Yes, he was our most destructive president ever, and he is still at it.

    The rulers of China have always wanted to conquer the world, and the virus is just their latest attempt to weaken resistance. -- Mike
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I enjoyed this piece Robert. Thought the line " Chinese Stealth" was very funny. I also thought the way you articulated your criticisms of Biden's stupidness through these pandemic months were very astute. Well done.


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
    Hello Justin.

    Thank you for taking time to comment on this poem. I appreciate your positive comments and I wish you a Happy Thanksgiving.

    Robert

reply by Justin Chopin on 26-Nov-2020
    You're welcome. Happy Thanksgiving to you too Robert.
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Yes, a bleak future awaits us with the loss of Trump. He was a great president and Joe Biden is no match by a long stretch. He seems to talk more than he does and promises things he can't deliver.

Excellent poem and a sober analysis of the situation. I liked the sharp wit, the imagery, the visuals. Excellent artwork.
Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
    Hello EM.

    Thank you so much for your positive and meaningful words about the content and style of my poem. America will miss Trump. He accomplishes things. People hate him because of how he talks. I stopped listening to him and watched what he did and the results he accomplished. America will be much less successful with the new president.

    Have Happy Thanksgiving.

    Robert

reply by Eternal Muse on 26-Nov-2020
    Is there still a hope for Trump with all the court battles he is planning?

    P.S. Happy Thanksgiving!

reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
    Hi EM.

    As much as I wish, I don't believe there is a chance. There is no question in my mind shady things happened but I don't think the election will be overturned.

    Robert
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We need to hold onto our hats because it's going to be another long bumpy ride. I just hope we can survive him like we have his predecessors. It's a shame Trump didn't get the recognition he deserved, but at least he can leave proudly, knowing he's the true hero. I just read yesterday that people who plan to fly internationally are going to be required to get the vaccine. I can only imagine what controversy that will cause.


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
    I'm just going to nail my hat to my head. When Biden starts rescinding Trump's executive orders, things will begin to deteriorate.
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I can see the US will be a divided country for a while to come yet, Robert. My country is just the same over Brexit. I can't see how Biden can possibly claim the glory over the virus vaccine when Trump has it ready to go in December! We'll be ready to start ours any time now. The Oxford Astra Zeneca vaccine does seem to be passing the tests. Fingers crossed both our countries are successful in this. This is a wonderful Cube 16 poem, Robert, well done! :)) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
    I understand Sandra. The world is losing it's mind and China is enjoying every minute of it. The media doesn't objectively report the news any more. I have stopped listening to, and watching, news broadcasts.

    You have to work hard to learn the truth these days. Thank you for your great review and meaningful comments.

    Robert
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The two-shot vaccine has side effects similar to the virus itself and no one knows the long term affect on those who get them. Biden can do nothing.


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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
    Hi Rebecca.

    I appreciate your comments about the vaccine. There are now three different ones and the word is they will start being dispensed here in mid December.

    Robert

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 25-Nov-2020
    I'm not taking any. I don't know why, but I don't trust them.

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
    Hey Rebecca. Take good care of yourself.

    Robert

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 25-Nov-2020
    I am. Don't be a guinea pig right off the bat.
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A very well-written cube 16 poem about politicians who talk more than they do and when others work hard to get things we done and working perfectly, the lying politicians claims victory.


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
    Hi Sandra.

    Thank you for your positive comments and meaningful observations. There is no credibility left in the media and politicians. The people have decided to believe nothing. That is no good.

    Robert
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