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It is a personal and Intimate well written poem of love. I particularly am drawn to the lines of beach castles washing away but "my joys with you whirl more raptured be it night or day." This is absolutely stunning writing.
I enjoyed reading.
Take care and regards,
Mary
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2020 |
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
Hi dear Mary,
Thank you so much for your lovely and gracious comments and
compliments on this one dear! Most sincerely appreciated, and
the extra star too. Lasting loves is always such a draw for
us poets to reflect on or write about, and this one especially
so for me. That you enjoyed it so, an added reward and uplift!
..Ps. Sorry for the prolonged delay response: My dear and most
closest to me Aunt, passed away in interim. services were out
of state, time never seems enough to keep up.
Thanks again for your wonderful reflections and comments,
stay warm and safe, and have a most loving and memorable
Christmas with you and yours! And a spectacular New year!!!
Blessings always, Ronni
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reply by Mary Vigasin on 15-Dec-2020
Thank you Ronni,
Sorry for your loss of your aunt. I understand my own Aunt and Godmother passed away this July. We could only attend her services via video. It does take you back some as she was always there and you expected she would always be here.
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Just so lovely Miss Ronni.
I love the comparisons.
Reminds me of my husband and I.
Time can't steal, what love has sealed.
I love the description too...'soul eulogies.'
Just hauntingly beautiful.
Blessings...
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2020 |
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
Hello dear Irish Rain!
Thank you for the thoughtful and reflective thoughts and comments
on this dear! Congrats on the "time can't steal, what love has
sealed" affirmation re you and your husband share! So happy
for you both!! Lasting loves like this, are always an inevitable
draw and memoir for us poets, and this one especially for me.
Thanks too for the extra star, ever so appreciated too!
PS Apologies for the prolonged reply: My dearest Aunt and
one closest to me, passed away in interim, services were out
of state, so time consumed inevitably.
Thanks again for your inspiring review....take care, stay warm,
safe, loved and loving always, as you are especially by your truly
here! Have a fabulous Christmas, and a blessed and rewarding
New Year!!!
Love, blessings always, Ronni
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reply by Irish Rain on 15-Dec-2020
So very sorry to hear about your aunt. That is such a shame. I send you prayers and thoughts of healing.
Your poem was beautiful.
I wish you a blessed Christmas, and most definitely an awesome New Year!!
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
Thanks dear, though she was
well into her late 80's, and
decline was slow and gradual,
still, so lovely & lively spirit
and inspiration, all the more
kind of person you longed to
kick back the aging clock a
few more decades! Thanks
too for empathy & prayers!
Love, Ronni
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reply by Irish Rain on 15-Dec-2020
That's wonderful that she got to live a long life, but it's still always too soon for those left behind.
God bless you, and I know she certainly was lucky to have you in her life.
I've never believed in death, I know she journey's on...and you will always sense her essence. Love, Judy...and hugs!
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Happy Holidays, Ronni. I am glad to see you back again. I hope you will be around more often with your wonderful poems.
Have a wonderful Christmas and please be safe. You are a dear friend. Bob
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2020 |
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
Hi dear Bob,
Well thank you Bob, I hope I will be able to be on here more often
too, and bless you for the nudge and notice!
Hope you too, have a safe, warm, loving and truly fantastic
Christmas celebration and a most rewarding and continually
successful book publishing career! Perhaps yet on The Best
Seller List? If anyone can achieve that,YOU can!!!
Sorry for the delayed reply: My dearest and closest Aunt passed
away in interim, services were out of state, so time consumed
ever so unavoidably.
Blessings and best wishes always! Ronni
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reply by Mastery on 15-Dec-2020
Sorry about your aunt's passing, Ronni. Bless you. and Happy Holidays. Bob
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
Thanks Bob,
She was in her late 80's but such lovely & lively spirit, and
forever endeared.
Same wishes for you and
yours for Xmas dear friend,
always! Take care!
Always, Ronni
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reply by Mastery on 16-Dec-2020
:) Merry Christmas, Ronni. Bob
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