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Only Such A Love


Gather soul eulogies to last evermore

  5 total reviews 
Comment by
Poetic Friend
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  Rank:  45
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  Rank:  196
 
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This is such a rich and an eloquent poem. It is packed with beautiful visual imagery and personification, especially in the opening stanza.

I love the refrain, which works effectively.

Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
    Hi there Poetic Friend,
    Thank you for your thoughtful comments, appreciations and
    compliments on this poem. Sincerely appreciated. So happens
    this poem is both reflection and personal experience memoir
    of this kind of love and relationship I have been blessed and
    fortuned with. Thus your lovely and gracious review is all
    the more touching and rewarding; as is your extra star award too.
    Thanks ever so much, I am all the more pleased you enjoyed it so!
    And glad I shared it.
    Gratefully, Ronni


Comment by
Mary Vigasin
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  Rank:  21
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  Rank:  49
 
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
It is a personal and Intimate well written poem of love. I particularly am drawn to the lines of beach castles washing away but "my joys with you whirl more raptured be it night or day." This is absolutely stunning writing.
I enjoyed reading.
Take care and regards,
Mary


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Hi dear Mary,
    Thank you so much for your lovely and gracious comments and
    compliments on this one dear! Most sincerely appreciated, and
    the extra star too. Lasting loves is always such a draw for
    us poets to reflect on or write about, and this one especially
    so for me. That you enjoyed it so, an added reward and uplift!
    ..Ps. Sorry for the prolonged delay response: My dear and most
    closest to me Aunt, passed away in interim. services were out
    of state, time never seems enough to keep up.
    Thanks again for your wonderful reflections and comments,
    stay warm and safe, and have a most loving and memorable
    Christmas with you and yours! And a spectacular New year!!!
    Blessings always, Ronni

reply by Mary Vigasin on 15-Dec-2020
    Thank you Ronni,
    Sorry for your loss of your aunt. I understand my own Aunt and Godmother passed away this July. We could only attend her services via video. It does take you back some as she was always there and you expected she would always be here.
Comment by
Irish Rain
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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Just so lovely Miss Ronni.
I love the comparisons.
Reminds me of my husband and I.
Time can't steal, what love has sealed.
I love the description too...'soul eulogies.'
Just hauntingly beautiful.
Blessings...


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Hello dear Irish Rain!
    Thank you for the thoughtful and reflective thoughts and comments
    on this dear! Congrats on the "time can't steal, what love has
    sealed" affirmation re you and your husband share! So happy
    for you both!! Lasting loves like this, are always an inevitable
    draw and memoir for us poets, and this one especially for me.
    Thanks too for the extra star, ever so appreciated too!
    PS Apologies for the prolonged reply: My dearest Aunt and
    one closest to me, passed away in interim, services were out
    of state, so time consumed inevitably.
    Thanks again for your inspiring review....take care, stay warm,
    safe, loved and loving always, as you are especially by your truly
    here! Have a fabulous Christmas, and a blessed and rewarding
    New Year!!!
    Love, blessings always, Ronni

reply by Irish Rain on 15-Dec-2020
    So very sorry to hear about your aunt. That is such a shame. I send you prayers and thoughts of healing.
    Your poem was beautiful.
    I wish you a blessed Christmas, and most definitely an awesome New Year!!

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
    Thanks dear, though she was
    well into her late 80's, and
    decline was slow and gradual,
    still, so lovely & lively spirit
    and inspiration, all the more
    kind of person you longed to
    kick back the aging clock a
    few more decades! Thanks
    too for empathy & prayers!
    Love, Ronni

reply by Irish Rain on 15-Dec-2020
    That's wonderful that she got to live a long life, but it's still always too soon for those left behind.
    God bless you, and I know she certainly was lucky to have you in her life.
    I've never believed in death, I know she journey's on...and you will always sense her essence. Love, Judy...and hugs!
Comment by
Mastery
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Happy Holidays, Ronni. I am glad to see you back again. I hope you will be around more often with your wonderful poems.

Have a wonderful Christmas and please be safe. You are a dear friend. Bob


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Hi dear Bob,
    Well thank you Bob, I hope I will be able to be on here more often
    too, and bless you for the nudge and notice!
    Hope you too, have a safe, warm, loving and truly fantastic
    Christmas celebration and a most rewarding and continually
    successful book publishing career! Perhaps yet on The Best
    Seller List? If anyone can achieve that,YOU can!!!
    Sorry for the delayed reply: My dearest and closest Aunt passed
    away in interim, services were out of state, so time consumed
    ever so unavoidably.
    Blessings and best wishes always! Ronni

reply by Mastery on 15-Dec-2020
    Sorry about your aunt's passing, Ronni. Bless you. and Happy Holidays. Bob

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
    Thanks Bob,
    She was in her late 80's but such lovely & lively spirit, and
    forever endeared.
    Same wishes for you and
    yours for Xmas dear friend,
    always! Take care!
    Always, Ronni

reply by Mastery on 16-Dec-2020
    :) Merry Christmas, Ronni. Bob
Comment by
greyson ernst
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nice job this is a good picture and the poem is spec tackler and as always keep writing and stay safe and have a happy holiday


sincerely Greyson Ernst


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Hi there, Greyson,
    Thank you for your bright and spritely comments and appreciations
    for this poem. Sincerely appreciated! And may you too, have a
    most terrific Christmas Holiday and joyous of New Year's!
    Take care, stay safe and warm...
    Best wishes always! Ronni
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