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Rudolph Ramblings

  6 total reviews 
Comment by
robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Writer,

Cute poem for sure, but I question whether it's from Rudolph's point of view. Sounds like it may be Santa talking? You may want to take a close look at the contest notes. Thanks and good luck!


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
    Thanks for your review. I was thinking of it as Rudolph talking to himself, psyching himself up
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Mary Vigasin
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I like how you ended instead with dear you used deer.
Very bright and clever and mood lifting.
I enjoyed the read.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards
Mary


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
    Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
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royowen
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This is an excellent entry in this Rudolf poetry contest, that poor old bullied reindeer was mocked by those very proud, but turned their jeers into jeers, with his glowing nose. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
    Thanks very much for your review.

reply by royowen on 10-Dec-2020
    Welcome
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Wendy Gordon
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I enjoyed this one, with a play on words at the end. It is cleverly written, and with good humour. The picture accompanying it is a good one. Best wishes for the contest.


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
    Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
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LisaMay
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Deer oh deer, poor Rudolf, making hard work of it trying to breathe through that facemask. You've used rhymes well to enhance this brief write. Merry Christmas to all!


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
    Thanks very much for your review. Merry Christmas
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Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-You wrote a good
poem with good
syllable count and imagery.
-You capture the spirit
of Christmas as Santa is
ready with the packages
to be delivered by
Rudolph and friends.
-A clever concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
    Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Dec-2020
    You are quite welcome.
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