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deadly silence


5-7-5 Entry

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To remain silent in the face of the unspeakable allows the wrong to scream out loudly: "Though I am wrong, I am king and my reign is supreme!" Therefore the righteous must proclaim in an even louder voice:
Not her, not today. In fact never!" And we must mean it to the poem of going to the mat in defense of our own stand. Good poem my brother.


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2020


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You can say that again. The answers are needed and shouldn't be hidden.
There is too much that isn't right and finding out what is imperative. Speaking out is necessary to save your country.

Ralf


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2020


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This 5-7-5, Deadly Silence, has the right set up and notes that the Republican Party has been holding up Putin as a good example if a leader. I guess they want that government here.


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2020


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You make a powerful point here. I like your rhyme of lines one and three. I think your words would be more universal if you eliminated the word "our" in line two. You might try something like
If we persist in silence,
Good luck in the competition


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2020


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