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It's Tonight


There's only one night like it

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Dorothy Farrell
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This is a great story and will bring back memories to many. ' heads are bobbing up from falling asleep,' - that's a great line. I remember actually doing that when my Mam was out at night and I would not go to bed, despite the baby sitter's pleading', until she came home. I used to keep wetting my eyes which helped LOL, Oh happy days long gone. Good luck in the contest. Love Dorothy xxx


 Comment Written 17-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
    lol that's too funny, Dorothy. wetting your eyes, splashing your face, anything but go to bed. lol thxs for the review and luck.

    lulube
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Every year same story with new/old dreams hidden under the tree. "One by one, the children of the world will fall asleep, with thoughts of a new bike, new dolly, new books and clothes, dancing in their dreams. Morning can't come fast enough, but it never lets them down.
Soon it will be Christmas morning and excitement, laughter and tears, will start the day.
It's happening tonight, it's Christmas Eve." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 17-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
    Thxs for your time and review. Happy holidays!!

    lulube
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This was a clever use of "it happens tonight"...using it for the Christmas season. It's a sweet narrative of a family's dynamic on Christmas Eve, and many people will relate to it. Very well written.
Linda


 Comment Written 17-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
    thxs for your awesome review. and happy holidays to you!!

    lulube
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