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Can You Spare One?


An investment in yourself and others you'll never regret...

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Aiona
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What a cute poem! It fits the 2-5-2 syllabic structure, and the picture that accompanies it is perfect. This poem is almost like a writing prompt in itself. Plot bunny!


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
    Thanx so much for the awesome review here, Aiona -- glad you could find a smile here: just be sure to pass it along! Be sure to stop by more often and Happy New Year! ;) Yvette
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So very true, this wee poem. We never know what the person beside us is going through, or what desperate measures he or she could be planning...


 Comment Written 28-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
    [So true - spread the sunshine!!]
    Good January afternoon
    And thanx for the review
    Know it?s weeks in arrears
    But I?m still so thankful for you!

    A happy and Blessed New Year
    And best wishes to you
    Together we?ll make it the best year
    That any of us ever knew!!

    Here?s sending you smiles with my sunshiny ?form letter? reply ? promise to be ?back to crazy and unpredictable? starting with tomorrow?s reviews, replies, and, most of all, postings!! ;) ;) Take care of you and be sure to be the light in your tiny yet important corner of the universe?

    Why is it an important corner? Well, cuz you?re in it, of course! ;) Yvette


reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 01-Feb-2021
    Sorry for the late reply. Not here much since my laptop quit. 😁
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l.raven
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Hi Yvette, so good to see you sweet girl...
you would be surprised how just a simple smile can
make a persons day...
I love your poem...and love you picture...
very well written...love you...Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 23-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
    [Lots o' luv right back atcha, Lady Linda!]
    Good January afternoon
    And thanx for the review
    Know it?s weeks in arrears
    But I?m still so thankful for you!

    A happy and Blessed New Year
    And best wishes to you
    Together we?ll make it the best year
    That any of us ever knew!!

    Here?s sending you smiles with my sunshiny ?form letter? reply ? promise to be ?back to crazy and unpredictable? starting with tomorrow?s reviews, replies, and, most of all, postings!! ;) ;) Take care of you and be sure to be the light in your tiny yet important corner of the universe?

    Why is it an important corner? Well, cuz you?re in it, of course! ;) Yvette


reply by l.raven on 03-Jan-2021
    Yvette, your a sweetheart...thank you sooooo much for all your kind words my sweet friend...always big smiles back at you...

    soooooooooo welcome you...love you...xxoo
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This 2-5-2, Can You Spare One?, has the right set up and suggests that a smile can make things better for someone who has stopped seeing the good in living.


 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
    Good January afternoon
    And thanx for the review
    Know it?s weeks in arrears
    But I?m still so thankful for you!

    A happy and Blessed New Year
    And best wishes to you
    Together we?ll make it the best year
    That any of us ever knew!!

    Here?s sending you smiles with my sunshiny ?form letter? reply ? promise to be ?back to crazy and unpredictable? starting with tomorrow?s reviews, replies, and, most of all, postings!! ;) ;) Take care of you and be sure to be the light in your tiny yet important corner of the universe?

    Why is it an important corner? Well, cuz you?re in it, of course! ;) Yvette

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Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of your nine syllables to convey a powerful message--stating a truth. There have actually been studies about the physical and emotional benefits of smiles and laughter.


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
    [No study necessary -- just a sunshiny fact!]
    A second January nod
    For your thoughts and the review
    As I said, I know I?m late
    But I?m still so thankful for you!

    Here?s some more New Year wishes
    Along with cheers to last a while
    Start working on your very own
    To pen in your unique style!!

    Another cheesy ?form letter? reply so that I can catch my tail and start off at least not miles behind this year ? lol! And, as I said earlier, we?re aiming for as many good vibes and smiles that we can spread this year ? the pen is more powerful than political winds: be not swayed from your grin! Cheers, my lady!! ;) ;) ;) Yvette
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Alchera
 
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Of course I can spare one! Smiling makes you live longer! It's like eating one apple every day you set the doctor away. What is a smile if not enriching your mouth and nearly closing your eyes as your heart enjoys.
Great idea for a this senryu structural format 2/5/2!


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
    [Yes -- and may our hearts always enjoy!! Thank you, Tony!!]
    A second January nod
    For your thoughts and the review
    As I said, I know I?m late
    But I?m still so thankful for you!

    Here?s some more New Year wishes
    Along with cheers to last a while
    Start working on your very own
    To pen in your unique style!!

    Another cheesy ?form letter? reply so that I can catch my tail and start off at least not miles behind this year ? lol! And, as I said earlier, we?re aiming for as many good vibes and smiles that we can spread this year ? the pen is more powerful than political winds: be not swayed from your grin! Cheers, my lady!! ;) ;) ;) Yvette
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Sandra du Plessis
 
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A very well-written 2-5-2 poem about the effectsadness a smile can have in our own or someone else's life. We can just cheer up some stranger without even realize it.


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    Thank you so very much!! Happy Christmas to you and yours!
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jaded831
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A smile is free but could do so much for the world. The emotion behind your poem, I hope spreads like the virus. We could use more smiles during this dark time. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    Thank you so very much!! Happy Christmas to you and yours!
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If I had a can of spray paint, I'd paint over the image associated with your entry because I also entered this contest and your submission is better than mine so I need to mess yours up if you don't mind.

I agree with the assertion about a smile.


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    Just be sure it's in bright, sunshiny colors - LOL! See? A smile is a wonderful thing: spray paint and all!! ;) ;) Thank you so very much, Paul!! Happy Christmas to you and yours!
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Dolly'sPoems
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This is so true and it costs nothing to give someone a smile and can put the world to rights and spread joy, I champion your words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    Thank you so very much!! Happy Christmas to you and yours!
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