Unexpected Romance The topic for this contest is: Unexpected Romance. For poetry or prose. The story brings two people together, two people who don't necessarily realize that they belong together but the audience is rooting for them.
Hi mystery author...I really enjoyed this parody about your corgi, It's very well written. However, I wonder if you know that one of the rules is that you can't write about pets? I fear that it might be disqualified because of it. Believe me, I've been there, spending a lot of time writing a poem, only to have it disqualified. Your dog sounds adorable though, your poem is terrific. Maybe check the rules again. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
Thanks for your review. I have sent a message to DS and offered to withdraw. Note to self: Read the Rules!!!
You know what the one song I hate is the 12 Days of Christmas. But I love this version actually I like it better. Well done.I think every pet owner with a puppy can relate to your 12 days.
Wonderfully done! All will love this! Very creative and cute. Great picture, and festive coloring. I sang it out loud and it goes quite well. Maybe too many syllables in puppy pee-pee, but it works :)
Well done. Solid contest entry,
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed. You were right about there being too many syllables, since altered.