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A Corgi Christmas Carol


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Boogienights
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Hi mystery author...I really enjoyed this parody about your corgi, It's very well written. However, I wonder if you know that one of the rules is that you can't write about pets? I fear that it might be disqualified because of it. Believe me, I've been there, spending a lot of time writing a poem, only to have it disqualified. Your dog sounds adorable though, your poem is terrific. Maybe check the rules again. Thank you for sharing. :)


 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Thanks for your review. I have sent a message to DS and offered to withdraw. Note to self: Read the Rules!!!
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Wendy Gordon
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A clever parody of the old song. But I bet your corgi was better behaved than that! Written with wit, and a beautiful photo as an accompaniment. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Thanks for your review. Wish she was better behaved, believe me
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Oh my goodness, who'd have a puppy for Christmas! Too much responsibility here and you made me smile, this is a fun write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Thanks for your review Dolly. Unfortunately this does not comply with contest rules
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Andrelyn Izquierdo
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I loved it! You set the right rhythm of the poem to go with the song. I read it out loud to some friends who also enjoyed it as well. Great work! Hope you have a wonderful Holiday.


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
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Mary Vigasin
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You know what the one song I hate is the 12 Days of Christmas. But I love this version actually I like it better. Well done.I think every pet owner with a puppy can relate to your 12 days.
Regards
Mary


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
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I assume you're the one who pulled out of the contest...no pets:(
Regardless, it's very cute. You definitely captured the beat and meter of the song. Happy Holidays.
Linda


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    So much for me even placing in the contest. No, that wasn't me but a lesson learned to read the rules.

reply by L. Kalere on 21-Dec-2020
    Oh dear...I've done that too. Had to skip two contest in one week.
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Wonderfully done! All will love this! Very creative and cute. Great picture, and festive coloring. I sang it out loud and it goes quite well. Maybe too many syllables in puppy pee-pee, but it works :)
Well done. Solid contest entry,
Lucy


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020



reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed. You were right about there being too many syllables, since altered.
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