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A Forged Light


This is an angry poem to see if anyone can see.

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Steve,

Oh, no!!! I hope your dog wasn't badly injured.

We have had several encounters with dogs in our life - both of my daughters have been attacked (at different times, by different dogs.)

They both bear scars. And each moment scared the devil out of me.

Thanks for a smart post. Hugs-


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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Thanks, Robyn. Bruce is at peace now.
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Oh my goodness, Jose is your dog alright? Did you get hurt? Is your daughter okay? I know the former nurse in me comes out when someone is injured. Now that was a pretty interesting poem to say the least. It wasn't a special star that made Christmas, nor was it probably the correct date. It was God and Christ that made Christmas special and that there is belief. It is ironic that the alignment of those two planets to the naked eye presented themselves on probably the worst year we have had. I do hope everyone is fine. Season Greetings and Blessings.


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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Alie. My dog is at peace. Yet, in anger, I wrote that piece and maybe I shouldn't have called the planets a Death Star, but I believe that many people will think that Jesus is coming or be born again and be misled. Let's see what happens.

reply by aryr on 23-Dec-2020
    I think you addressed the poem correctly as I said it is not the star and probably not even the right time, only God knows. When you wrote in your response that your dog is at peace, does that mean the other dogs killed him/her?
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A very well-written poem about the illusion of a Bethlehem star that comes to try and receive the children of God and make them believe it is a sign that He comes soon but surely I agree with you it is confirmation that the devil try once again to deceive the world.


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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Sandra. I believe that many people will think that Jesus is coming or be born again and be misled. Let's see what happens.
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I could feel your anger in your poem and then read the caption beneath it and saw the reason. That kind of encounter is devastating. I will keep you and your pet in my prayers for yours and mine are dear to us. Thank you for sharing.


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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Annie. My dog is at peace.
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Firstly, my good wishes for your dog - I hope he will be okay. You are right about the star. There is one Light, one salvation through Jesus, and He will return at the right time, not predicted by man. Stay well and safe. Take care.


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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Wendy. My dog is at peace. I believe that many people will think that Jesus is coming or be born again and be misled. Let's see what happens.
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Why are you calling this the Death Star? It's a rare alignment, similar to the one recorded around the birth of Christ. The scriptures say we will see signs in the (heavens) and signs on the (earth) before the return of Jesus Christ. The main sign of the coming of Christ is a culmination of signs: apostasy, persecution, lawlessness, break down of moral code, pandemics, earthquakes, fires and billowing smoke, violent weather phenomenon, wars, rumors of wars, and Israel. Israel is the timepiece to watch. God is not finished with them yet. Finally, the rise of the kingdom of the AntiChrist and False Prophet. A mark will be offered during this time, sometimes this is referred to as the mark of the beast or 666 (the gematria number of his name), and if you refuse it, you'll be killed. If you receive it, you'll be eternally marked as Satan's property and meet the same end as the devil and his demons.

Unfortunately, people go off on one thing thinking: this is it!!! Jesus said we'd recognize the season of His return, not the day or hour. It is a big secret kept by the Heavenly Father. I do suspect it is soon. Be in peace, Jose. Search these things out in the scriptures for comfort. That's what I do. Remember too, God made the heavens, not Satan. Satan has zero power where heaven is concerned. I hope to write on this more in 2021 from my years of study. Blessings always,
Sal :) XOs....


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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Sally, I agree with you. Yet, in anger, I wrote that piece, and maybe I shouldn't have called the planets the Death Star, but I believe that many people will think that Jesus is coming or be born again and be misled. Satan has no power in the heavens, but he's a trickster.
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Dangers lurk around every corner in life and our innocence is marred by our experiences. These words, however, are forever faithful and hopeful, I hope your little dog is okay, love Dolly x


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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Dolly. My dog is at peace. It's a little hard on my soul.
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Well done, I applaud your bravery for expressing a less popular opinion. I love the picture that you chose, although the animals are not the scariest beings on this planet, it's the people. A lot hide behind the star, while scurrying in the dark.


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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Thank you, kmoss. I love the stars. Yet, in anger, I wrote that piece because I believe that many people will think that Jesus is coming or be born again and be misled.
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Thank you for sharing, Jose. You are right that mankind tends to want to find salvation in other people or in the Creation. But salvation is only through Jesus. I hope your dog is alright now. Did you have to take him to the vet?


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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Helen. Bruce passed away, on the way, in my arms. I wrote this poem in anger and called it the Death Star because I believe many will be misled by it.

reply by lyenochka on 23-Dec-2020
    Oh, I'm so sorry to hear!
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