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a man power of a 20th century


a skill is a skilled man power

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Goodadvicechan
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The author is very skilfully in pointing out both the difference and similarity between power and experience. I value experience more than power. Power although can get things done but can make one lose one's conscience. But experience help people solve problems.

Good writing.



 Comment Written 16-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
    thank you for the time of day for your review,goodadvicechan! "your so vein" means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer
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godlucifer:

Your philosophical writing is quite interesting. I had to
go back and reread your poem after I read your author's
notes. To be honest, I think I will have to read a bit more
of your work before I can get a handle on it.

Rdfrdmom2


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
    thank you for the time of day for your review,rdfrdmom2! sorry for the late reply. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer
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Very good. I'm not sure I get the meaning of this work, I like the idea of a philosophical work using middle ages language. Good art work, Great job, wishing you continued success.


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
    thank you for the time of day for your review,taurus the elder! sorry for the late reply. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer
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I think you have a really good feel for this genre of words. I admire when a writer has such a keen sense of their own style and spirit. The photo is stunning.


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
    thank you for the time of day for your review,lefthandedscribe! sorry for the late reply. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer
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greyson ernst
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this is really really impressive nice job and the picture is perfect picture perfect and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy 2021


sincerely Greyson Ernst


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
    thank you for the time of day for your review,greyson ernst! sorry for the late reply. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer
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