Football Chapter 12 part 2
Katherine finds out who's been watching her.
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The Muse of My Heart


A Minute Poem about the love in my heart.

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I love this poem Jose. You give us an insight to your personal relationship with creativity, from amusement to wisdom, in heartfelt honesty.
I enjoyed the rhyming and the variation in line lengths - it added variety to the rhythm.

She lets me chose, (in this context it should be 'choose'.)


 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
    Thank you, Jenny :) for the stars and your comments. I'm glad you liked it.

reply by LisaMay on 12-Jan-2021
    I'm sure many others will appreciate it too.
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I really enjoyed reading this verse, Jose. You give us a glimpse into the creative part of you. I know it will do well in the contest!! Well done.

Melissa


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
    Thank you, Melissa. :) I'm glad you liked it and for the stars. :)
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Very nice poem. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and it didn't feel forced. I can totally relate to a muse waking me in the telling me i need to write something. It is quite good.


 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
    Thank you, Jaime. :) I'm glad you like it.
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This is a good entry to the creative process contest. It's short and sweet! I like your description of your muse. She lets you chose but also wakes you up.


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
    Thank you, K. :) I'm glad you liked it.
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The Muse of My Heart is a wonderfully whimsical poem about how your writing is influenced by your muse.
Your muse is whatever makes your mind work and your creative spirit to spark. Good job with this.
Sammielwf


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
    Thank you, Sammiel. :) I'm glad you liked it.
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