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A Hectic Heptad

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This is one Hectic poem, Dolly. Yet, I think you are trying to tell us not to waste time cause there is little left of it. You may be right and Que sera, sera. We are only the ones that feel it, no one wants to believe in it, but time will stop one day for everyone. This is one true entry for the 20 Line Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 06-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your review, I appreciate your words here, love Dolly x
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How cool that you wrote five stanzas and something that can be hectic is the rush of time. Lots of good advice and various metaphors. Hope you do well in the contest.

With my American accent, I found "with vigour and with new designing," didn't have the trochee in the beginning and it has 9 syllables. I don't know if that's intentional.

Anyway, I just ordered your book! Again, Amazon made it really hard to find the book by your name but found it by title.


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
    Well spotted Helen! Whoops this is a slip up and I have corrected it. Thank you for your eagle eye! Thank you for ordering the book. I had the same problem searching for my book, you would think they would make it easy as they want the sales! Love Dolly x
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Dolly,

Entertaining and pleasing - to the eye AND ear, as always. I can't wait to see what this year's book shall contain or feature (or should I say bookS?)

Have you decided on any topics yet? Hurry, hurry, your fans are aching to know!


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
    Thank you Robyn for your review, I am taking a rest from themed books this year as it is such hard work and I want to spend more time with the grandkids. But next year I was thinking of famous figureheads! I already have one! Catherine the Great! We will see, love Dolly x
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'not with paint that's counterfeit'... that actually resounds a lot louder than some may think... ;) :) Of course, tis but a small part of such a grand offering for the contest, Dolly -- I do like this one: like a collection of the thoughts from a poet's mind delivered in lovely rhythmic, rhyming stanzas!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette


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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
    Thank you Yvette for your review, I really appreciate your words and that line was thought of before the rest of the poem was written! So I am glad you enjoyed it, love Dolly x
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This sounds like a winning poem to me. It rhymes so beautifully and I like the thoughts behind your words. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your review, I really appreciate your confidence in my poem, love Dolly x
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If we are wise we will redeem the time. Today there are so many things that are time wasters. May your year be filled with wise use of your time.
Patricia


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
    Thank you Patricia for your review, glad you enjoyed this one, love Dolly x
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A very well-written Hectic Heptad about not wasting any time. Do whatever there is to do at any given time and do it the best way you can to be satisfied with your efforts.


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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
    Thank you Sandra for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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Your trochaic metre worked wonderfully well with your hectic Heptad.

So true, time is valuable and it doesn't much like it when you waste it.

Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee, Dolly. :)

Gloria


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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
    Thank you Gloria for your review, I appreciate your good wishes here, love Dolly x
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Lovely artwork. Time is a tyrant. You have some great suggestions for winning out over time. Writing, studying nature, praying--all are excellent suggestions for rewarding ways to make use of time. Writing can help "Quell the showers," as you mention. Excellent use of rhyme. This is a great contest entry, and best of luck. judi


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
    Thank you Judi for your review, if we don?t notice time passing, we may have wasted it Judi. I remember being at work and wishing five o?clock would come, so that I could go home, I must have wasted many hours in a job I hated, love Dolly x
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Hello Dolly.

Time is a tyrant as you say. It is relentless. Even when we ask for a timeout, it keeps moving and we keep getting pulled along. Time does have its pleasures as you point out in stanzas three and four.

Robert


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
    Than you Robert for your review, time seems to go by so quickly these days, love Dolly x

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 06-Jan-2021
    You're welcome
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