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Dont Waste Time


A Hectic Heptad

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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
    Than you for your review Raul, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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Good luck with the contest, Dolly. What a wonderful choice of topics, and an interesting rhyme pattern. I loved the artwork, it was amazing. Time is too precious to waste, isn't it?


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your review, glad you enjoyed the subject here, love Dolly x

reply by aryr on 05-Jan-2021
    You are most welcome, Dolly.
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Wow, Dolly. How very well done is this verse that you created for the 20 line prompt. I am in awe of your clever use of the Hectic Heptad and can see it is a perfect choice for this type of contest. Well done.

Melissa


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you Melissa for your kind review, I am honoured by your words here, love Dolly x
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Your poem about time is skillfully and creatively written, thought-provoking, and realistic--while being uplifting. Yes, we know time is a tyrant, but our desire to be happy and create our poetry is powerful.


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you Janice for your review, Shakespeare called time a tyrant and I just love that description, I appreciate your words here, love Dolly x
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The last verse has wonderful words written: The only thing it is not easy to forget. So do we forgive? Jesus forgave us, so we must try to forgive.

Let your heart begin departure,
don't regret, try to forget;
fill your scenes with views that charter,
not with paint that's counterfeit.


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you Rosemary for your review, I so agree with you about forgiveness as it is really freeing, love Dolly x
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I think this is a great motivational poem for those who may struggle with intermittent depression or melancholy feelings. I really like the "t" consonance and half rhyme of paint/counterfeit at the end of this rhymed poem.


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you Crystie for your review and your six stars, I am thrilled you liked this poem, you are so observant in your reviewing, love Dolly x
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Both you and Ronni have lifted me today with your positive outlooks and encouraging words. Thank you for this poem, so beautifully stated. Sending you my best today as always
Sal XOs.....


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you Sally for your review, and I am honoured that this poem had the power to uplift you, loe Dolly x
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A fine piece of poetic advice at the start of the New Year. We kill time. We get robbed of time, we lose time, and we have all the time in the world. But we can't stop the march of time or slow it down. Thank you for sharing the wonderfully written poem!


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you Seshadri for your review, I liked your analysis of time here, love Dolly x
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A poetic discourse on time. I have a feeling Stephen Hawking would have enjoyed this, perhaps Einstein as well. Your poetry begins to appeal to the brainy ones with that question how can time be running out.


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    I love poems questioning the passing of time and the shortness of it. I really appreciate your review, love Dolly x
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Great advice to begin the new year! Looking at nature can freshen our outlook - awaken our muse - and help maintain a positive attitude. Let's not waste time on negativity. Very inspiring sentiments!


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you June for your review, and your six stars, glad you felt inspired, much appreciated, love Dolly z
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