God Whispers to Me a Life
What God whispers to me about a life. Pl read Author Notes 		Pays: 10 points.
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I like the picture. It gives you a happy and refreshing feeling.

I also like the title: Don't waste time. There are two words I particular like from this poem: "Watching nature..." UNFORTUNATELY WE CANNOT GO OUT... due to this pandemic.

Let's hope the newly approved vaccines can defeat the virus and save the world.


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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Than you for your review, I am sorry to hear you cannot go out, I have been fortunate to go out whenever I want to, but I know that does not apply to everyone, I appreciate your words here, love Dolly x
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This is a truly delightful twenty line poem, musical in meter and amazingly rhymed. It is also wise in its message. I enjoyed this very much. Best wishes in the contest. I am sure this will do well.


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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your review, glad you enjoyed this one enough to give it six stars! I am honoured, love Dolly x
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This is a very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. The imagery is evocative and the piece flows well. I particularly enjoyed the rhyme between forget and counterfeit. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day


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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you Oliver for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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Love this stanza reminds me how fragile is our life and that we need to make the best of it :"

Time, the tyrant always dying,
running out, there is a drought;
crying, sorrow, death defying,
how can it be running out?" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you Iza for your review, much appreciated, have a good week, love Dolly x
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This is a great poem about not wasting time. We could write poems, paint pictures or just simply watch the flowers grow. This is a good advice.

Well done.

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you Lisa for your intuitive review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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A fine poem, that exposes the tyrant that is time, which none of us can hold it back, we will never defeat, however the only person that overcame death was God, taking us with Him, only by faith, and then we can live beyond this body, well done, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    This poem was inspired by Shakespeare?s sonnet number 16 when he wrote of time slipping away. I appreciate your review, love Dolly x

reply by royowen on 04-Jan-2021
    Well done
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