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I like how you structured this poem. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Very creative poem. I like your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
    Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
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Sometimes more seem to be discarded than are kept, no? :) :) A fun offering for the Naani contest here -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


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    You are so right about 5he discarding issue. That's why the backspace and delete buttons on my computer are so overworked!!
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I like this - it has a sense of energy and entertainment with the trapeze motif. Using creativity to make judicious choices about what to use, what to leave out, is the framework of poetry-making - the ABC's.
That's a very appropriate image choice too. Well done.


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
    Thanks for your review. A writer's life is a wobbly juggle!
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Very effective use of the words "Trapeze" and "Tumble." Paints a great picture of the letters swirling around in our minds, until the right ones finally make it to the page.


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
    Thanks for your review. Exactly the picture I wanted to portray.

reply by Anne Johnston on 08-Jan-2021
    You are welcome.
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Dear Mystery Poet,

This was fun! I couldn't help but think of my granddaughter in her new tumbling classes - she's four. The way we write, sometimes, does kind of look and feel like that, doesn't it? *smile* Thanks and good luck!


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


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    Thanks for your review. Letters are always tumbling in my head, all they have to do is land properly
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Creative trapeze
Letters tumble with ease
Some are discarded
Poetry ABC's - Nice tweak between geometry and literature:) thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


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    Thanks for your review. Geometry was never my strong suit so glad you saw it that way.
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